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Ah! I see - kewl deal then - I always do adore being "on time" persay - but I generally find myself a day late and a bankroll short LOL - But it's nice that you comment - makes me feel.............appreciated
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I felt this like a cool breeze. It was a calming piece and it's the exact thing a brother would love to hear after a long day of work and getting cooked chocolate in the sun factory. "Come Home to Me," Whew that's nice and fulfilling thought indeed! I feel revived in your words!
i just re-read this and i have to say i have never gotten such a sense of peaceful longing, and it had deep spiritual undertones...so much warmth, even in the loneliness of it...i think it has and aura of hope and grace about it. You should write more of this styld...it's quite good.
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I felt this like a cool breeze. It was a calming piece and it's the exact thing a brother would love to hear after a long day of work and getting cooked chocolate in the sun factory. "Come Home to Me," Whew that's nice and fulfilling thought indeed! I feel revived in your words!
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment, Tha-Emmisary...I appreciate it!!
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i just re-read this and i have to say i have never gotten such a sense of peaceful longing, and it had deep spiritual undertones...so much warmth, even in the loneliness of it...i think it has an aura of hope and grace about it. You should write more of this style...it's quite good.
zaac
zaac, thanks again, for such soothing and encouraging reviews...glad you were able to enjoy a second time.
...picking up pencil and paper today on the way home from work :grin:
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Oh, wow, this is beautiful! I believe that you started off this poem with the first line/stanza of the poem and I was immediately interested in it and wanted to read more. You have very strong and beautiful imagery throughout the poem which just makes it a delightful read... also, each image just flows into the next adding to the smoothness of reading your poem and I really enjoyed how you ended it too.
This is a very calming, relaxing, and this is just great:
in autumn’s falling treats
in winter’s icecled dreamland
as starry skies do wait with me
come home to me.
I especially like the last three lines for the imagery and how you end with the last line being "come home to me." Thank you for sharing and keep on writing!
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