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Old 10-22-2006, 06:02 PM
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The Window Pain
Inside,
broken glass shards
reveal a moment
I'd rather forget;
Outside,
they walk as if
the hell I hold
means nothing at all.
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Hi, Benny, I really enjoy short writes such as this, less is more as they say!! I was fairly certain I was on top of this one til I hit your second but last line ummmm, guess I will have to pop back later and have another lookie ;-) Sax.
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LOL...people cannot see what is inside you. That is the point of this little ditty. Pity...
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