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 FOR CRITIQUE. Armistice Day is always on 11/11. This Sonnet is based on 11 syllables, in 11 lines.
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Two lonely beings, abruptly meeting amidst Life's mess.
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please critique... i might enter this into a contest at school... thnx
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I usually don't write poetry like this, so I'm not quite sure how good it is really....
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He is telling her why he loves her
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poem about the moments after death
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08-19-2009 04:04 PM
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(referring to the life in a trench during WWI)
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A poem about mankind's ability to turn technological wonder into death
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i know its my signiture...
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a poem im not sure of
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nature
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life happens
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I would love some critiques because I'm going to enter it in a contest and need to fine tune it.
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