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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    “ Beneath Delicate Whispers”

    As the full moon’s delicate glow
    Blush behind their dancing shadows
    As his whispers caress her radiant flesh
    Her eyes closed, she holds him tenderly
    Trembling beneath his hushed whispers
    She surrenders.
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    His soft delicate voice became his hands,
    As they travel her fiery passionate flesh,
    Her whimpers echo through the stillness,
    Tempting his love cravings,
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    As the stars glisten boldly in the midnight sky,
    Kissing awakens her dreams to real,
    As her whispers perforates his most sensual desires,
    This quivering beauty paints the night with ecstasy
    Trembling beneath her delicate whispers,
    He submits.


    Posted By Bear | Mar 6, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey TOM - this piece is SWEETNESS - I love the idea of "painting the night with ecstasy" Very lovely phrasing.... Seems someone's in the mood for some SERIOUS L-O-V-E

    After reading this piece - I've concluded that that someone is ME :blush2:

    Very nice poem - Thanx for sharing it with us ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 8, 2007
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    Dear Bear,

    This is so sensual, so sweet, and quite lovely. The act of just letting go and falling into each other's desires without any circumstance, just love, and true passion. :wow: Very nice write Bear. Thank you for sharing!!

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}:blush:

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so very much
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Mar 23, 2007
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