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    dazamaru Member

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    My daughter sleeps, and she does not know
    Of the unease within me.
    Am I able? Am I capable...
    of raising a Queen?

    Anxiety and anticipation...
    becoming this very moment.
    I hold my breath.
    Knowing what is to come
    And not knowing.

    Must I grind words on words on words?
    Or will the silence of my eyes
    Carry their full meaning into her heart.
    So that without speaking....

    The sun sets, both luminous and natural.
    As the swan places its trust in the lake.
    A light of galaxies springs forth of itself.
    and my love and concern for her shines...

    Will I be able to care for her?
    Will she truly know her father's design for her?
    Will she truly know her father's undying love?

    (c)2006 intercontinental abstractions.


    Posted By dazamaru | Feb 15, 2007
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    ~Serenity~ ~Pixie Princess~

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    Hiya Dazamaru! I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading your work before... But this piece brought me to tears, it's absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this inspiration =)

    Smiles!,
    ~Serenity~


    Posted By ~Serenity~ | Feb 15, 2007
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    Benny New Member

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    Great poem here! Wonderful presentation about something I understand...a parent always worries about their child's future and their part in it...yeah, great write!


    Posted By Benny | Feb 15, 2007
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