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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by BekiLynn, Nov 17, 2007.



    BekiLynn New Member

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    1)

    Addiction

    I wake at daybreak
    desperate with longing;
    there's no antidote
    for this need to be with you-
    your touch is my addiction.


    2)

    Beacon

    Watching the shimmer
    of early evening stars
    I realize again ~
    I am meant for your beacon
    in this dark and lonely world.


    Posted By BekiLynn | Nov 17, 2007
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    I meant to ask you for this the other night...you read my mind? Very nice Beki and it doesn't hurt, does it? "Addiction" solid, no pill for that, lol. "Beacon" very interesting. So, two thumbs up for both.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Nov 21, 2007
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    I love these! They are so beautifully crafted and executed. The message in both speaks volumes in their brevity.

    Just :wow:

    Kim :)

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    Very Cool :]
    So much in so little words.....

    BekiLynn New Member

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    Thank you for reading Kit - and fo ryour comments. And thank you too ladies.


    Posted By BekiLynn | Nov 26, 2007
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    Very beautiful penning Beki I love them they speak from the heart of you
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Nov 30, 2007
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    BekiLynn New Member

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    THANK YOU BEAR :)


    Posted By BekiLynn | Dec 23, 2007
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