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    jasmine321123 New Member

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    _Wrapped In You_

    My Passion is in these written words inked beacuse of you,
    youv'e seized my life wrapped in your blanket letting my tears on to the pillow flow,
    For a person's love is not something to squander freely,
    without you all i see are empty skies without my star.

    When all my fading furies die,
    my flames are quenched out with just one spoken word,
    my chest falls from heaving sobs,
    your love is where my angel lies.

    I feel a broken heaven in my heart,
    the darkness in me spreading over,
    but wait my love i see a flickered candle,
    rest apon your plam tracing contours apon my face,
    I do not worry now for i know i am not alone.


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    Very nicely done! Love that layout too!
    What I really like is the upbeat ending!
    Terrific last line!
    -Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Feb 28, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Yeah...it was making me sad D:
    until the last lines...

    hope is a beautiful thing.

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    Ahh...lovers quarrel...and the ending result...making up. Loved your poem!


    Posted By Benny | Mar 4, 2007
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