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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Uncomprehending
    blindfolded
    she turned
    slowly at first
    then twice more
    feeling
    her way
    so sure
    as something
    familiar rose
    up to her nostril
    she knew that scent
    twitching…aahh
    where did it go
    she stopped, unsure again
    lost in a sea
    of nothingness
    darkness pervading
    every atom
    of her being
    so still...
    was anyone breathing
    she thought, or
    had they left her?
    A dark whisper
    came to her astute ear
    she stepped forward
    uneasy and
    tentative at first
    then quickly
    stuck out her hand
    and connected
    “Gotcha” she said
    as she ripped
    off the blindfold
    such a fun game
    of Blind Man’s Bluff…
    “shall we play again?”

    © nomadicrhymer

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Oh this is playful and creative Nomad.
    I had fun with this one, cute write!
    It was well written too, good images.


    Posted By Moonchild | May 3, 2008
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