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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    A Mirror`s Image

    Eye to eye
    He blankly stares
    A moment or two ~ at last
    Blinking ~ thinking
    Reflections, selections,
    Recollections
    Of memories past.

    Blue on blue
    The iris` hue
    A tear or two ~ a flask,
    Frowning ~ drowning
    Sighing ~ crying ~ dying
    Beneath a painted mask.

    A jester, a clown
    A clown, a frown
    Brings laughter to his peers.
    Storming ~ performing
    Puny, sunny, funny
    Only the mirror sees his tears.


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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I like this...itz very visual to me, itz like I can see this person in the mirror not just allowing himself to look at his reflection of the present or himself but reflections of his life and emotions that have occured in hi life....very good I enjoyed this one seems to say so much to me, I can actually relate to something as similar as this....;Thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Aug 28, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    only teh mirror sess his tears what a line really great
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Yeah - great last line that sums up a fabulous write. Hey SALLY - beautiful piece - the rhythm and meter of the unforced rhyme is quite amazing - I enjoyed this one immensely - Thanx for sharing it with us!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 28, 2006
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