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    Carlos Andrade Jr
    Put me to the test//ima show you I'm the best/why this girl tryina ask me to hit her with the flex? Girl please, u can just go around teasing//cuz I'm aiming to please/suckas can't see me/I'm in the hood/they around in the suburbs thinking/how can i be like this dawg?//YOU CAN'T//BALLIN in THIS/you know it!
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    Posted By cpvr | Apr 22, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey Carlos - I must say - I do like a little bit of rap every now and then. I'm more old skool though as we talked about yesterday lol - I see you getting your flow on. But honestly (and I hope you don't mind me being honest) your rap has been done before. I've heard those lyrics before in more than a few combinations actually... I'll say this = if you gonna come = come hard and come unique and come with innovation. Come with with your own style, one that personifies who you are and is a geniunely unique flow.

    This way when folks here or read your lyrics, they'll be able to say, "Yeah, that newest cpvr verse was tight as fuck! He came original with his!"

    BTW - I forgot to tell you there is the Music sub-forum . I told you one of our members does (or did) quite a bit of recording - I found one of his threads at http://jpicforum.info/forum/music/its-been-while-let-go-gristified-productions-5849.html -- kinda kewl production...

    Anyway - thanks for the share and again = Welcome to JPiC ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 22, 2011
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