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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    “Romance For One"
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    As a gentle rain falls,
    In a paradise far away,
    And a storm surrounds you,
    You stay, cuddled knowing your safe.
    The candles are lit flickering from the wind,
    And the fireplace has a wonderful warm blaze,
    ~
    You feel a peacefulness inside,
    Even though the storm rages outside,.
    Your favorite music plays softly,
    your day seems perfect,
    As you dance around with a broom,
    in the foggy purple mountains,
    ~
    The woodland creatures are hiding in the hills,
    The wild-flowers are in bloom, drinking up the rain,
    You are treasuring the tranquil days you are spending here,
    But you must go home soon.
    ~
    The days are now gone, and you must leave,
    accomplishing everything you needed to do,
    Now you have that very special place to go,
    when you want that "Romance For One”
    And as you drive away, a brilliant rainbow appears.


    Posted By Bear | Mar 23, 2007
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    Beautiful Poem!
    I think everyone needs a special place (and time) like that!
    The picture is a perfect complement to this type of poem.
    Well done!
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Mar 27, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Tree

    Thank you so very much for the great comment and I do agree with you 100%
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Mar 27, 2007
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    Very well written...I also think we MUST take the time to experience moments like this for ourselves...the best time for honest reflection.


    Posted By Benny | Mar 31, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    You are so right and thank you for your great comment
    handshakes
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Mar 31, 2007
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    mistyllspoetry Billy Corgan's Shadow

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    Nothing like seeing a rainbow on top of love
    it can't get no better than this!
    Steam to the fire how hot and deep
    is love's promise?

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much for your great comment Mistyllspoetry


    Posted By Bear | Apr 5, 2007
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    Dear Bear,

    :wow: How novel is "A Romance For One"? That was simply exquisite, beautiful picture, wonderful title, beautiful concept, and well executed. Yes, we all need to experience this from time to time. The place you took me to in the poem was very serene, peaceful, and tranquil. I did not want to leave. This is a must read. If I cannot get to my "place", I know, I can come to this site and read this again, and be satisfied. Lovely!!Thank you for this very much needed poem.

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}} :)

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    WOW Thank you so much my sweet Painted I sure hope that you come to this place often it is very peaceful and serene.
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 6, 2007
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