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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Small friend
    the world is in your hands
    hold her gently,
    while she's in your trance.

    Each race,
    his history, clay
    a piece to mold
    a sculptor's dream.


    Posted By JolieH | Dec 3, 2007
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    Benny New Member

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    Powerful words! Sounds like an ode' to truth to me, Jolie. Wonderfully done in so few words. Truth is like that...


    Posted By Benny | Dec 22, 2007
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    Oh Jolie....I am in love with this piece. It is the epitome of an artist's grace upon the media as well. Words ring so true, and are so innocent, if you will. The picture with the poem is brilliant together and adds to the depth of the poem. The brevity also adds another dimension and this is simply brilliant. Love it, excellent rating, and going in my favorites!!!! Love ya!

    Kimberly :)

    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    This is one of my favorite sculptures of Madonna and Jesus. The picture is a bookmark.
    I keep it on my easel. It’s one of my favorite things. It truly is a sculptures dream.

    Thank You Benny and Kim
    I haven’t had many comments on this poem, and I think it’s one of the best I’ve written.


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 16, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Absolutely beautiful Jolie ..... Stunningly short but full of meaning.. I love this style of writing myself...... you have done this Beautifully.. Love this one Jolie

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 17, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    We are all in debt to are parents and most of all God.I love the way your poem makes sure we know we owe ourselves and not just Ideals, ( so it seems) but dreams and then some! Thank You for your beautyful write Lolie.

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    Lovely image and poem, the light of spiritual hope.

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