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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    "A Slice Of Heaven"


    Will you remember me in these fields of daisies

    Reflections of each flower swaying in your eyes

    Showing their true colors

    Whites, yellows contrasted with green

    Against this blue sky

    ~

    Your smile

    As bright and cheerful as the suns rays above

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    The times I kissed your face

    Your beautiful face

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    What is it about your soul

    That strikes me so

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    Our walks in these fields

    Fields of daisies

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    The love we shared with each other

    The melodies our souls played together

    With each sunrise and sea breeze

    Blanketing this sea of daisies

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    I will remember

    The charm, the radiance, the warmth

    You bring upon this heart of mine

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    Your dress sways in the wind

    Like the kite we fly high above

    Against the clear blue sky

    I tie the string on the old park bench

    We lie next to

    ~

    Our minds are overwhelmed by each others love

    That we share

    The passion that unfolds

    While we kiss each others lips

    Tenderly biting down on your lower lip

    I taste the sweetness of your lips

    Remembering the cotton candy we just shared

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    I smell the scent of your perfume

    That embraces your beautiful neck

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    I lower your shoulder straps

    That secures the summer dress you have on

    Exposing the lace you wear

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    I run my fingers up and down the crevice of your

    Soft skinned back

    You shiver in delight

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    This beautiful lady I’m with

    Is a slice of heaven

    Passion running through my soul

    She’s an angel in disguise

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    She breathes with softness

    That of lambs wool

    Pulling each other in closer

    Our heads begin to spin

    Spinning out of control

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    Our souls come to a rest

    As I smell the fragrance of her soul

    Arthur Henn 2007

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    Dear Art,

    This is equisite in every way. So beautiful are the words you paint onto your canvas.

    This beautiful lady I’m with

    Is a slice of heaven

    Passion running through my soul

    She’s an angel in disguise


    This would make a lovely painting. I enjoy reading your works as they take me to another realm. Thank you for sharing. Love Ya!

    Kimberly :)

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