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    Sartor JPiC Contributor

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    All Hallows Eve
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    Beware, long shadows grace the land
    Apollo bids adieu,
    His dying rays have softly tanned
    to brown the daylight view.
    .
    Beware, the twilight thick and hot
    Is fading into dark,
    bar now your doors and question not
    The mewling howl or bark.
    .
    Beware, with darkness comes the shade,
    the goblins, ghosts and ghouls.
    This night alone for it was made,
    this night when evil rules.
    .
    Beware the tortured moon is tossed
    upon a cloudy sea,
    when mankind out of doors are lost,
    no matter where they flee.
    .
    Beware, across the land will flood
    the hell-hounds from the pit.
    Their drooling jaws will drink the blood
    and gorge themselves on it.
    .
    Beware, the knock upon your door
    demands you pay the price.
    You cower there afraid before,
    the knock comes twice, and thrice.
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    Beware, you fool beware, beware.
    Your fate you now will meet.
    From a three foot goblin there,
    Shrieking "Twick or Tweet" !
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    Sartor


    Posted By Sartor | Oct 14, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Sartor,
    After reading this goulish nightmare, I'll be afraid to answer my door for a week. I'll never trust those little trick or treaters again.

    All nicely said, I wouldn't expect less from such talent as yours.


    Posted By JolieH | Oct 15, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    great Sartor this was fun and well written, I missed your writing

    Sartor JPiC Contributor

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    Jolie............Yes indeed..........the little goblins will be out in force on the Eve of All Hallow......beware, take care and see ya there!!...........thanks for the note.
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    Hey Eric................I am just really busy these days..........have not had a lot of time for posting on the forums...........thanks for the note


    Posted By Sartor | Oct 16, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    LOL Sartor this is Splendiforous .... absolutely Magnificent. I can see someone is thinking about Halloween. Don't you just love the little tykes that come to your door all dressed up? Well I love the little ones.... but abhor the older ones.... because the little are still innocent...... the older ones .... well they are tainted... with opinions and attitudes. Things I can do without. Meh anyways hope you have the kind of evening you want on ALL Hallowed Eve.

    :hug:
    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 16, 2007
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