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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Terence, Jun 8, 2007.



    Terence Member

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    Adulation,
    Laudation,
    Lionization.

    If that is why we write

    We've surely lost our soul.
    All I want to do is write,
    Not ask that you extol,
    Treasure or indict,

    In any way, my word.
    So go ahead and say

    That you have been angered,
    Or I have brightened up your day

    With all my views on life.
    Remember though, my friend,
    It matters what you see,
    That in the end,
    Each word I write - is me.


    Posted By Terence | Jun 8, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Terrence that matters the utmost,

    a great poem you used some word I'm unfamiliar with which made it fun,

    enjoy these 5 stars the star attraction your poem today
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Terence,

    I have read your poetry, and am now catching up on my commenting, and this is the first. You write with strength, and a catalyst that screams attention. You are very gifted dear, and I love this poem here. You inspire me as well. Keep'm comin!!! Love your work, and :welcome: again to the community!

    kimberly ;)

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    very nice!
    wow......

    VERY nice Acrostic...
    sometimes it is hard to break from the stereotype because it is used in younger school...lol and we all butchered it then.

    nice job!

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    Thank you, erik, for the rating and lovely response. I'm pleased you enjoyed this, as is my aim.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 10, 2007
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    Terence Member

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    Dear Kimberly, I appreciate your kind words very much, and thank you for that great welcome.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 10, 2007
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    Terence Member

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    Hi, Anna, thanks for your thoughts. Poetry was not something I was introduced to at an early school, I'm pleased that you have the opportunity as you are obviously headed for greater things with your own writing.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 10, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey TERENCE - very strong write! I like how the piece speaks "This is me and always gon' be me - If you don't like it.... F**K off!" But only in an eloquent manner :lol: --- I love the unapologetic honesty of your poem. Very nice write!

    Thanx for sharing it with us ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jun 29, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Terence - this is an awesome write!!

    So go ahead and say

    That you have been angered,
    Or I have brightened up your day


    There are so many reasons why we write and hard to pin it down precisely at times, but no matter...the deep satisfaction that we get deep down inside from the self-expression is priceless.

    Thanks for sharing,
    Nomad

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    Terrence magnificent write and so truthful as what you write is you
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 30, 2007
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    Terence Member

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    Thanks, Jacquii, Nomad and Bear, though we often write from a fertile imagination we can't take ourselves out of our result - there is no compromise. I appreciate your delightful responses.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 30, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Terrence,

    You have a classic here. the content is well placed and your ending is the best. My fav:

    Jerry

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