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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    in what would have been a lovely day
    i stayed locked away in my head
    facing the same familiar rejection
    i thought if i would open up
    people would accept my heart
    i thought if i could give trust
    then honesty would come around
    seems that the answer has always been...
    shut the world out, shut it all out
    i dont want to face another day
    thinking about everyone who turned away from me
    like everyone else in this world,
    i would like a companion...
    and that just seems to much to ask
    cause i havent met anyone who accept me for who i am
    it's not like i'm mental, crazy, bitter, jealous... well, just a little maybe
    but i'm not so different... i think that the world is just sick of it
    everyone has heavy loads... equal struggle, cant get along
    so why open up to anyone new?
    when inside you know, they're almost just like you.

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    wonderful ending, smooth and easy flowing,
    I liked this poem

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Phillip,

    Your prose is so opaque. Your expressions are raw. Your conclusions so clear. My Fav:

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    Blessings!

    JErry


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Aug 1, 2007
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