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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Tanax, Dec 5, 2007.



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    Alone

    Yea, this is actually a repost.. I posted a poem before, that was made out of some lyrics. The parts I didn't write myself, I erased, and wrote my own stuff. This one I call alone. I think it turned out pretty nice anyways.. :)



    There's a limit of how much a heart can take,
    I gave you everything, I trusted you!
    Yet, my heart you always break,
    why can't you for once, be true?

    I wish you could see,
    how much you mean to me.

    Because eventhough you always hurt me,
    you always remain,
    I just wish you could see,
    that you're giving me too much pain.

    Everytime I give you out,
    I never get you returned.
    I feel like I want to shout,
    but my spirit you've burned.

    I'm sick of you,
    I don't want you anymore.
    Why can't you go away,
    and knock on someone else's door?

    I'm too weak,
    I'm too shy,
    I'm too much of a freak,
    to even try.

    You call yourself love,
    I call you a desease.
    A desease I don't want,
    just go away, please?

    Forever unwanted, I'm sinking like a stone.
    Forever in pain, forever alone.



    Posted By Tanax | Dec 5, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh wow! I've been feeling this same way for quite some time now... It's interesting though to see it in print and laid out so boldly... This poem is heartbreaking MARCUS - There's just so much emotion and passion within the writing - I don't know what else to really say about this poem, other than to say - I can appreciate the passion with which you've written.

    Thanx for the sharing ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 5, 2007
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    It's a pain in the ass to feel like this.

    I feel like I have this weight on my chest. Everytime I'm happy, the weight drags me down again, into the depth of depression. I'm thinking about starting taking anti-depressive pills, but I'm not sure how they work, and if there are any side-effects.

    Thanks for reading, and thanks for commenting!
    I'm sort of glad you can relate, I mean.. it's not good that you feel like that.
    But I'm not the only one who feels like this, woho >.<

    Anyways, thanks.


    Posted By Tanax | Dec 5, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Pills aren't the way. believe me. -.- It made a former friend's family more screwed up and dysfunctional.

    *huggles*

    You know, it's not the freaks who don't try. It's the freaks who do try :]
    It's the rare people who know how to stand on their own and grab what they want :D

    that's why it's so rare to find happy people in life-most people don't know how to get what they want (provided they do it in the right way, of course) :]

    i hope it helped.
    "(

    *huggles*

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