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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by ronbliss, Dec 14, 2006.



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    Your flowers planted last year, Dear,
    Have bloomed this year in June,
    With summer now near leaving,
    Colder days are coming soon.

    The mums that gave you great delight,
    Are beautiful to see,
    I only wish you could be here,
    Enjoying them with me.

    My days are long and lonely since,
    You moved out of our home,
    I struggle Dear, without you,
    As I live my life alone.

    I visit you with every chance,
    But you don’t know I’m there,
    Some days I sense, in heart and mind,
    You know I’m there and care.

    It doesn’t matter if you know,
    And recognize my face,
    For I am yours and you are mine,
    Beside you is my place.

    So even though, I stroll alone,
    And walk among the flowers,
    Just as before, you’re there with me,
    To share my lonely hours.

    Tomorrow, after breakfast Dear,
    I’ll be there at your side,
    If it is so, that you don’t know,
    Still, in you love abides.


    Posted By ronbliss | Dec 14, 2006
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    beautiful poem, what i liked about it was its sincerity beauty and flow were on point

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    Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem. Some people see the title and shy away from it A topic not to be enjoyed and yet genuine love last beyond the bounds of what we typically feel is a normal life. This is a problem that seems to be growing as our health care system keeps us living longer. Glad you responded. Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Dec 14, 2006
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    my grandma had Altheimer's really no one wanted to be around her anymore,
    my dad and I still did but things really do change for most people

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