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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Amaranthine Woman


    A kiss so mellifluous
    should be scandalous at least
    when you part lips of velvet
    I must covet like a beast.

    Restive flutters have no sound
    as profound as they may be
    when you have left my embrace
    I must face mortality.

    © Jerry P. Quinn 1997

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    Dear Jerry,

    :wow: I am in awe of this piece! The sensual power in its brevity is amazing! There is not a favorite to quote, as I would quote the entire poem. I pictured the entire scene as you placed me there. This would make an awesome painting! You have outdone yourself here. I do love this genre as you well know, and I can hope for an encounter like that one day, ;). Fantabulous Jerry!!! :bravothanx:

    {{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}};)2 :heat:

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    WOW Jerry!!!!

    Romantic bliss!! This expertly written poem brings on soft kisses and warm embraces, which makes this wonderful piece total perfection.
    Super rhyming sceme and great structure.

    Applause!! applause!!

    Blessings

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I don't know what restive is,

    mostly was a very good poem,
    great ending

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Kim :bowing: I'm humbled!!!!

    Sally thanks for you comment

    Erik. I am grateful you aren't restive when it comes to comments!

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