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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    An Erotic Nightmare
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    Her soft gentle blue eyes radiate deep, igniting the flames of desire
    A nightmare to some but not to that special someone
    Who dwells deep within her heart
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    In his eyes she glows with the radiance of the sun
    She is soft gentle and shy, as she commandeers her lover’s eye
    Erotic, mesmerizing, toying with the slightest speck of tease
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    Solace, tranquility, peace is what she found in his soul
    Noone knows where this may lead
    She is the only one who knows what she desires
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    Stay silent throughout the night
    Listen to the whispers of the sea
    With her eye on the future of love
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    Is where her journey will emanate
    Holding her securely in his embrace
    During his erotic nightmare


    Posted By Bear | Sep 22, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    So deep and sweet at the same time. It's really nice :D


    Posted By Aumakua | Sep 23, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Aumakua
    hugs kisses
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    Posted By Bear | Sep 23, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    Np ^^ Your poetry deserves it :)


    Posted By Aumakua | Sep 23, 2007
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    Ahhh Bear, another journey you have taken us on. How lovely and beautiful. I love the dark undertones that add depth and meaning. The visuals are exciting! Loved it Bear, and an excellent rating! :bravothanx:

    PD :)

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much ms Painted
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    Posted By Bear | Sep 23, 2007
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    ahh ...... such a sensual nightmare.... Beautiful Bear. Loved it :)

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Sep 23, 2007
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    Thank you so much Mysty
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    Posted By Bear | Sep 24, 2007
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