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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Music---Sage Sweetwater creates in multimedia
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    Motivated by
    intellectual
    curiosity and
    astrology, its
    direct influence
    of the stars and
    planets on earthly
    events.

    The celestial Llama
    disappeared at
    midnight to drink
    water from the Earth
    to prevent flooding.

    Entering the force-field
    of the other world, is
    where her spiritual pulse
    is felt the most. She
    travels the same path
    of spiritual progress.

    Supporting the holistic
    Gaia, all life is interrelated,
    only moving forward with
    a balanced coexistence with
    the environment.

    The Hermetic Emerald Tablet
    links both spiritual and physical
    to living nature and to the
    heavens---the source of wisdom
    and understanding.

    As for me, I am the wild
    unicorn who has a desire
    to lay my horn in her lap
    at the new, full, and waning,
    the phases of the moon.


    Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey SAGESWEETWATER -

    This is a very beautiful read - I love poetry that embraces the natural elements. But your poem entertwines the natural with the mystical - Love the very last stanza about the unicorn. Kinda speaks of just simply wanting to be one with beauty & peace, which are essentially the same thing.

    Very nice piece - Thanx for sharing it!

    Jacquii.


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    Dear Ms Sage,
    Yes, these are beautiful lyrics to nature and that special someone. For me, the one word to describe this poem is "transcendent". I also get a sense of being one with your "Supreme Deity". Many mystical symbolisms in this piece that intricately ascend to your garden of Eden. I feel the peace, the tranquilness, the love, being one with her, with nature, and with yourself. I particularly love the following stanza as well as the last-------->

    The celestial Llama
    disappeared at
    midnight to drink
    water from the Earth
    to prevent flooding.

    Such beautiful "fluidity" in conjuction with such picturesque verbiage, leaves a smile on my poetic heart. What does the above stanza symbolize? It is magical! I am in awe of this piece, simply breathtaking Ms Sage. Thank you ever so kindly for sharing.

    Painted

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