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    And I Wonder If I’m Not in Love

    By Uriah Lee Hamilton

    Walking alone in the cold rain
    Sad concrete beneath my feet
    Dusk descending alienation gloom
    In these hours separated from
    The hopeful afternoon.

    My heart has been in the rain
    For years,
    I’ve shed rusty, graveyard tears
    Long frozen with forgotten grievances.

    I’m convinced, I haven’t
    The ability to any longer love
    But a face enters my memory,
    And I wonder if I’m not in love.

    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    First of all, I would like to welcome you sir to JPIC! Your poem here is "wonderfully majestic" I enjoyed it ! Thank you for sharing!

    Uriah Hamilton New Member

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    Thanks

    On both accounts, thanks.
    Uriah

    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    nice write

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    Your imagery reflects the harshness of the emotions, well done.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 28, 2008
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