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    I want to tell you I'm alright but it seems you can't hear me talk
    You seem to be crying while saying my name
    But I can't make you hear me no matter how loud I talk
    Everything seems to have change, nothing at all seems the same.

    I see someone lying on a bed that looks like me
    The poor person lying there seems to be dead
    I can't understand why you are crying saying my name,see
    I'm trying to let you know I am here but you can't hear anything I have said.

    Something strange, it seems I am looking down on all this
    So how does one hover over others and not be seen or heard?
    Death? Did this hideous thing find me to kiss?
    This just can't be I need to stop being absurd.

    If I have graduated to another plane it would explain all
    But this just can't be! It's to bizarre to be true!
    I'm aware of everything and all
    But no one knows I'm here, so it must be true.

    It all makes sense now, I have traveled to a different dimension
    I just wish I could let you know that I am all right
    See I finally realize the person on the bed is me
    To stay alive I no longer have to fight.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 6, 2006
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