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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    "As You Look Toword the Sky"

    As you look toward the sky
    Please remember you and I
    and our love,
    As you see the clouds appear
    Please remember I am here
    and up above.

    Our hearts were full when we were young
    And the songs we often sung
    just you and I,
    All our memories always brings
    Many different little things
    so please don't cry.

    Dearest darling please be brave
    When you look upon my grave
    you see a dove,
    And you look toward the sky
    Please remember you and I
    and our love.



    Blessings
    Sally aka Forestdawn

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    When I read this poem it sorta made me think of the movie the notebook as far as the kind of love that was shared in the relationship...It seems like a moment where you were on your death bed and this would be the last convorsation you two would have and you were telling him "don't cry when I die....just continue to live on for both of us and remember the good times we shared together" This is so lovely and sweet; Thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Dec 6, 2006
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