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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    ~ASCENT OF BEAST~

    There's death upon the heart of night.
    Phantasmal apparitions haunt twilight.

    The beast of midnight's ebon breast,
    into the dark with spirit blessed,
    cast thy evil word of tongue
    upon thy voice of demon's lung.

    The signs of scripture have begun.
    There beast and beauty become one.
    The thorn of rose upon love's wrist
    has called upon a secret tryst.

    The beat of lover's hearts entwine
    as two become one soul of thine.
    Cast upon thy sacred word,
    thy will be done the beast hath heard.

    Thy lips caress the rose's thorn
    as contrition of redemption's born.

    The blooming of the rose in bloom
    has breathed its scent upon the noon,
    and both depart to love's sweet tune
    where two have bore a three so soon.

    Soul to soul born of one seed,
    together risen upon thy creed,
    there's birth upon the dawn of light
    where beauty, beast and rose hold tight.

    © Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 18, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Karen,

    This is incredible, as all your work is...so refined, delicate, and perfectly executed. Rich in words, and images. Like a kid going into a candy store to see what is new...loved it. Love Ya!

    Kimberly :)
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    This has sort of an ethereal quality to it :wow: and almost reminds me of a Midsummer Night's Dream...or it could be a "chant" by the "ladies" of Stonehenge...at the full moon...I love it! Excellently written...an old world quality which just draws you into the rhythmic beat.

    Nomad

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you so much Kim.
    Glad you liked the images.
    I appreciate your kind words and I love you too :wub:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 26, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    What an interesting reply!
    Thanks a bunch Nomad.
    I'm so glad you loved it and I appreciate
    your kind words, thank you :heart:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 26, 2007
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