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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Starr, Jan 31, 2008.



    Starr New Member

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    The right weapon would bring the ocean
    to boil:

    A
    fishbowl
    finale,

    a tide
    dried
    red,

    bone,
    sand,
    flesh,
    metal

    and anything else
    that could be left
    for dead.


    Posted By Starr | Jan 31, 2008
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    reasonrhymer New Member

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    Wow,

    lot said in a few words, Ash Hole.

    Well said.

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    oooh ouch ...... Very well said however I think it should be "Any weapon could bring the ocean to boil". I mean what would be right about a weapon that has the ultimate power to destroy billions of life forms? If the ocean species died... it would not be long before all life on earth was to follow. It is sad to think of our fragility... but we are fragile. Excellent write Starr.. this is an eye opener very clear and concise.


    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 17, 2008
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