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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, Oct 10, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Autumn’s Quilt
    ~
    The autumn leaves drift to the ground
    In flakes of orange, reds, brown and gold
    Float to earth like a surreal snow
    In the breeze of the golden harvest
    As they fall they do a waltz
    In the wild October breeze
    ~
    Dancing around to autumns harmony
    Quietly coming to rest
    On this peaceful autumn morning
    Their scattered on the quiet floors
    Also known as the autumn landscape
    Sawn like a multi-colored quilt
    Created with mother natures hand
    ~
    In the misty October morn
    The golden harvest long underway
    Fields agitated and cut deep
    Like the collected thoughts
    In the corners of my mind
    The radiant sun slowly simmers away the mist
    Illuminating the lovely October landscape
    As the wind disrupts the tranquil scene
    Chasing the leaves away
    Dissipating them like my fantasies


    Posted By Bear | Oct 10, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    WOW Bear..... this is like you saw right inside my mind... Autumn is my favorite time of year and I LOVE how you rendered it here. You did what I was trying to do when Eroticism came out of me. This is truly Magnificent....... I can see it all so clearly in my head. Thank You for a truly beautiful rendition of my favorite time of year.


    Love

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 11, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Bear this was a beautiful read...and I can only imagine the lovely autumn leaves falling in Chicago right now...wonderful imagery...

    Nomad

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Mysty so happy you love this poem I too long Autumn and right now it is more like autumn here cold windy and turning beautiful.
    hugs kisses
    Bear

    Nomad Thank you so much you'll have to visit chicago in autumn sometime I live about 180 miles west of chicago way out in the country and it is beautiful here especially near the river
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Oct 11, 2007
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    Terence Member

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    You have some very perceptive images, Bear. My favorite is probably
    "The radiant sun slowly simmers away the mist
    Illuminating the lovely October landscape"
    That brings back fond memories of many a misty morning.

    Thank you.


    Posted By Terence | Oct 19, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Terence
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Oct 20, 2007
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