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    ~Awake To Have~ (Jefferys Sonnet)


    Let your true feelings fall on me.
    Like the rain falling on the trees.
    Hugs and kisses to touch my friend.
    Encased love and friends apices.
    Our bodies warmth comforts our please.
    Loneliness left; gone with the wind.

    Let our hearts mend suspend our pain.
    We have a lot of love to gain.
    We have crossed over the paths past.

    Twinks 12-06

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    only one thing in thsi poem I'm not sure of and that is what apices means,
    other than that good feeling, the ending was kind of a previou slife mention their which I can like allot
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    Erik...apices is the same meaning as apex...here are some words...top, peak, climax, height, high point, zenith...woo-hoo...:drinks: great word to use to cover up the nasty little words...thanks for your comment...Hugs, Twinks

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    thanks twinks yay learning new words
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    Erik...I was raised with a dictionary in one hand and the bible in the other. Have a g'evening:yay2:
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    Hey Twinks, this is a very lovely lii piece, that speaks volumes. I love the word apices and its incorporation in the poem. Funny how many can relate to love poetry, and this was simply lovely. Thank you for sharing with us.

    ~*Painted*~
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    Thank you PD for your comment...:thanx:

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