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    TheBlackPoet New Member

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    In the beginning… in a previous life…

    Something about her drew me…
    I was awestruck as I watched her draw me with the skill of an angelical artist
    Her genius was her command and it was wielded with the precision of a mystical surgeon
    My heart was in her hand and I trusted her without condition

    I am her one; she is my Excalibur who pulls from my stone the sword of absolute power…

    Present day and time…
    From across the net I knew who she was
    I was not blinded by time or space or the elements thereof
    Nothing could deceive my heart or my eyes
    I knew at once that it was her
    She did not know me or even her own self
    And I was sadden to know my Queen… was trapped in darkness
    Blinded by lust…
    Deaf to my call…
    Unaware of herself…
    And I wept…

    It took all of my will not to bow
    And give away my thought
    She was worn and stained from the infidels who had many times touched her with dead hands
    Unable to raise her with a righteous mental
    But her spirit remained unscathed, pristine,
    How could she not see!

    When I was close enough to touch her
    I reached out, and with the hands of a true Reiki master
    I instantly attuned her many chakras

    She was enlightened
    She spoke; “I see and hear your righteous mental.”
    I stood witness to the heavens open its breast
    A great light burned away her sins and purified her.

    My hair became white and my eyes could not fall upon this ineffable creature
    Who is the mother of everything physical and all things spiritual.

    In gratitude, she touched me on my crown and I died then and there
    My destiny fulfilled

    There is no greater truth to tell you of this woman than she is
    More than the five colors,
    More than the eight tones of sound,
    More than and greater than anything and anywhere.

    She is

    The Queen….

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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear BP,

    Where do I begin on a masterpiece like this to give it proper and appropriate commentary. As of right now, I am speechless to this piece of paradise...and will return.....amazing!

    Kim :)
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    wow .......just :w::o::w: ...... I am totally speechless and ooooh I have tingles all over. What an awesome work. Thank You for a really really Great Read.

    ~Mysty~


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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Whoa, BP!! You have delved deep with this one, as with your previous pieces...you enlighten the reader to new awakenings of love, reverence and homage. I absolutely love the following lines...

    I stood witness to the heavens open its breast
    A great light burned away her sins and purified her.


    because they speak of new life, new beginnings, forgiveness.

    More than the five colors,
    More than the eight tones of sound,
    More than and greater than anything and anywhere.


    Fabulous imagery...which takes me down a shimmering road of colors, soothing the soul and speaking love to the heart.

    Nomad

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    Superb! Brother

    Again, I wish the hell I could write like this. Everything you write flows so well together and has great imagery. You have a style that stands out and comes straight from the hart...A straight arrow.

    This was GREAT!

    I am her one; she is my Excalibur who pulls from my stone the sword of absolute power…

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