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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Jul 25, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Awakening Kiss
    ~
    Through the mist of the night
    I have seen you within my dreams
    The turquoise waters of the stormy sea,
    Tempting me with her emerald eyes.
    And so I pursue her
    ~
    Swift as the zephyr winds
    That transports me to the edge
    Of her sea, I remain
    Starving for the sweet agony
    Of being engulf within the depths
    Of her gentle embrace.
    As she advances towards me.
    ~
    I take her soft gentle hand
    Throughout the enormous space
    Of timeless realms
    We sail upon the wings
    Of the night to caress the dawn
    In the sparkling brilliant colors
    Of an awakening kiss


    Posted By Bear | Jul 25, 2007
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    Oh Bear,

    Another stunning and beautiful write. One cannot help fall in love around you and with your words. Loved the entire piece and lovely visuals to compliment. Ya know "zephyr" is one of my favorite words and I use it often. Loved this Bear! An excellent rating!

    Kim ;)

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    This is very visually stunning.
    Such beautiful imagery and words.
    I too like the word "Zephyr."
    I really like this poem, very well done!


    Posted By Moonchild | Jul 25, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Painted Thank you so much for your fantastic comment I like to try to use different words to express my visions
    hugs kisses
    bear

    Moonchild
    thank you for your wonderful comment I like to try to bring my readers the visuals I use to write and describe in my poems
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jul 26, 2007
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