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    BekiLynn New Member

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    Seagull feathers
    on the shore at low tide ~
    empty skies.

    Courageous puppy
    plays tag with the tide ~
    loses, nose first.

    Sunset lingers
    in a child's sandpail
    half full with the sea.

    Deep ocean stillness ~
    dark sea and starless sky
    become one.


    Posted By BekiLynn | Nov 15, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    These are especially lovely since they deal with my favorite subject, the sea :yay: ...coming from a family of fishermen I have lived and breathed the beloved seas my entire life. I feel the peace and tranquility, the playfulness, and the stillness before the closing of the day in these pieces... thank you!

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    BekiLynn New Member

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    "I have lived and breathed the beloved seas my entire life" me too I have lived within a mile of the pacific ocean my whole life except for a 9 month mistake in south carolina...I have a very special affinity with the sea and whenever I am too long away I nearly shrivel up from lack of salt air ;) Most of my poetry includes ocean images -- or moon ones, my second favorite subject. I am glad you liked these


    Posted By BekiLynn | Nov 17, 2007
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