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    amachristian New Member

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    As dawn approched I watched the sun
    glisten round the trees
    One by one it's rays peeked through
    the branches and the leaves
    To kiss the ground in my front yard
    then spread most everywhere
    I saw it all but sorrowed still
    because you weren't there

    I didn't feel like eating
    what else can I say
    I didn't want to go to work
    yet worked the longest day
    When time to leave for home, my heart
    only felt dispare
    Opened my door and sorrowed still
    because you weren't there

    Tonight the moonlight's shining
    brighter than I've seen
    And music made for lovers
    has caught me listening
    Maybe one day I'll love again
    but now I just don't care
    Left on the light and sorrowed still
    because you weren't there

    sage New Member

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    This beautiful lament of love that 's gone is just awesome...you have captured the mood and special moments exquistely. I thoroughly enjoyed this one.:give_heart2:


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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    amachristian New Member

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    Sage,
    You are so kind. Thank you for reading and for your reply.
    Sheri
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I have to echoe Sage's sentiments. Made more enjoyable by being able to relate :give_heart2: love it!

    if you're interested..."only felt dispare" spelling is "despair".

    Nomad

    sage New Member

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    you are most welcome sheri,:giftrose:

    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 9, 2006
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