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    Posted By Jeez | Aug 25, 2006
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    Amzy A friend, Well met.

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    Intriguing, and true. Nice delivery.


    Posted By Amzy | Aug 25, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Jesus Christ - this is terrifying picture you told us about JEEZ - tend to want to think that you're not talking about me and my perfectionism with typing skillz lol - Truly adored this poem, though I will not be the 1st to admit it though...

    I will just say that I'd love to know your motivation for such a scribe... Very interesting piece to say the very least - though if I did say the very least, there'd be no need for the previous commentary.... At very most I'd possibly say this is a tricky MASTERPIECE!

    Whichever way the wind blows, just know that I truly appreciated this write - Thanx for sharing AND I definitely will be looking for your additional shared poetry. Again - WELCOME to JPiC - intriguing read! AWESOME delivery!

    JAcquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 25, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Aug 26, 2006
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    truly creative/inspirational

    & enjoyed the spin you inserted this one as well artist. that opening stanza was mesmerizing & set the tone for the entire piece to flow smoove like melted molases. look forward to partaking in more your words yeah. one-

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    Posted By Jeez | Aug 28, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Just 1 more comment LOL - That 1st stanza is TOTALLY AWESOME!
    Fantastic writing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 28, 2006
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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 2, 2006
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    Dear Jeez,

    Yes, just hypnotizing is this piece of paradise. Bravo poet. Simply captivating! Take Care.

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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 9, 2006
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    You have arrived

    JEEZ, what a strong, narrative poem! Outlines the ills of modern-day society and tackles politics in the true, bloody sense! This poem, JEEZ...lances open the wound of pain and cover-ups, denial of society's sickness and lays it open before us in authenticity...I have monitored your work for quite some time and your work soars today, Jeez...thanks for studying my work over the last two years...I appreciate you as a friend, a poet, and a fan...keep up the great work...Sage Sweetwater told you it was possible to achieve this, and here you are...I am impressed....you have arrived...be well, Jeez....

    Warmly, Sage

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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 12, 2006
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    This was a powerful call to attention. It reminds me that there is so much more I could be doing to make a difference in the world. I hope everyone that reads this piece is as stirred and confronted as I was.

    Well done.

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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 19, 2006
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