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    lil Flow New Member

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    :heart: Like shakira's essence of a supernatural rythem,
    you put your hips into a twist,
    slowly unwinding to a point that sends me to
    climax
    Im short of breath
    you roll your hips,
    faster,
    hastening my respiration and my mind into a frenzy
    thoughts of how those hips must hold more than rythem
    but also the key to bliss and nirvana
    those hips
    rockin, shakin, windin and movin
    movin my mind into a place no man has led me
    your paradise,
    within the folds of your skirt
    the jinggle of your bells ask me to watch,
    lure me into that paradise and pull me closer
    in your jungle of music and love,
    i sit scared and excited,
    waiting for you to led me into another dance
    set the beat and i will brace my feet,
    your hips dont lie about the miracle of your being,
    the ora of your music and with each note,
    your belly dancing body urges me to sing.
    tonite, as i sleep, the dream of you will send me
    into song, as your dancing body
    moves on my mind


    Posted By lil Flow | Dec 16, 2006
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    Posted By athlone | Dec 17, 2006
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    I'm diggin this like crazy....Very good imagery of the dancing seeming so intimate and mesmerizing, It's like one of those moments where the is no sound and things all around the dancer and you are frozen or even not there at all, Whooo itz gettin hot in here nice job; Thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Dec 19, 2006
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    Damn, I need a man!!!! Loved it!!! Whewwwwww!!!!! LOL!!! You did your thing on this one!!!!

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