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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Tanax, Oct 7, 2007.



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    Best friend
    To Karolina

    For all the times you've helped me,
    I can't thank you enough.
    You've always been an angel,
    eventhough you also had it rough.

    You're one of my best friends, if not the best,
    I just hope that you the same way feel.
    Because you're special, you're not like the rest,
    you can really help me heal.

    I love you, in all the ways friends can love each and other,
    I hope you love me too, as if I were your own brother.


    Posted By Tanax | Oct 7, 2007
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    Hey now Tanax,

    C'mon now, say what ya really mean! lol....... I hope she gets to read this 'cuz I think she'd luv, luv, luv it......
    I think ya got your message across - this has feeling.....
    Nice penning Tanax..........


    Posted By lasher | Oct 7, 2007
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    Tanax Member

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    Haha, what do you mean? ;)

    Nah, but really, we're just friends :)
    And she did read it .. and loved it :D

    Thanks !


    Posted By Tanax | Oct 8, 2007
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    this was cute and cheeky.. loved it.. the subtle hints and the way you siezed the opportunity to express how much you cherish such a friendship... well it was really a great read...

    at least now you wont have any regret on what you never said.. because this read to me... says everything a friend needs to know...

    great job.. and do me a favor... never lose your honesty.. and never let fear get in the way of what you need to say..
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Tanax that was a lovely penning to a good friend and I'm sure it brought tears to your friend's eyes...nice and tender.

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    THank you!
    And don't worry, I won't lose my honesty :)

    Thanks! :jump:
    I doubt that, but maybe :)


    Posted By Tanax | Oct 11, 2007
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