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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    I'm sorry.
    what else can i say?
    I'm sorry if i am not perfect
    like all the other people-

    But the fact is, I'm not perfect,
    I'm not like you.
    You say I'm good enough for you,
    but that's not true,
    See me for who I am,
    please don't be blind...

    I'm sorry
    i don't fit your visions
    I'm sorry if you can't see the truth
    I don't want to live this lie...

    But the fact is, I'm not perfect.
    I'm not like you.
    you say we're just like each other.
    but that's not true,
    See me for who I am,
    please don't be blind...

    Instead of hating myself, for what I cannot be
    Just love me for who I am, for what is me...

    And the fact is, I'm not perfect.
    I'm not like you.
    you say we're just like each other.
    but that's not true,
    See me for who I am,
    please don't be blind...

    See me for who I am,
    please don't be blind...

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    My sweet mango, tis truly a song you have here and a really good one too! You should find a band that likes to put music to words. this is a winner!

    ~(;) Jer4Clarity
    Creator of the Clarity Pyramid


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Nov 6, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    Zomg! I love this so much :D

    Really kick ass lyrics with such a true meaning TT.TT

    Lyrics are hard to write o_O


    Posted By Aumakua | Nov 7, 2007
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    this sounds very much like a young girl who does not believe in herself and believed it when someone told her she wasnt worth a damn. it says please love me even tho i am unloveable. the problem is not with his heart or the fact that he is right about you...it's about her heart learning that she is indeed a flower in the snow.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Nov 7, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks Jer and Aumakua :]
    I haven't written in a while...
    and a friend asked for lyrics, because he had made a nice song, so I wrote this from one of my rants I had one day with a former friend...

    Thanks Zaac, for reading...
    I wrote it will a little something else in mind....but your interpretation is amazing too :]

    Beth Castillo New Member

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    This is amazing ... great rhythm (probably because it's a song) ... and haven't we all felt this way some time or t'other ...

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    wow...thanks...
    i wrote this kinda spur of the moment...didn't even pay attention to rhythm...
    i guess i'm so used to writing in rhythm that it comes naturally now.
    this actually stemmed out of a rant i had to a former friend.
    i docked some words out, changed a few lines, rearranged things...
    thanks :]

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I like how you say don't be blind
    mainly because people can be blind as in uncaring
    very good mango

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks erik.....
    it encouraging that i haven't lost my creativity, what with all the analysis i've been doing -.-"
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Mango, this does sound like a song...a mournful one...an entreating one...who would be the singer? hmmm....? Very nice!

    Glad you are writing again, chica!! Now I have to get myself in gear too....hehe

    Nomad

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    lol....thanks Nomad...
    and actually....I might make this into a song....i'm tinkering out a tune :]

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    Magnificently written Mango for no one is perfect and I too just want to be loved for who I am and not for what Im not if you love me you won't try to change me Fantastic penning Mango my sweet little one
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Nov 30, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks Bear :]
    *huggles*
    I do what I can :bows:
    lol
    but yeah....what I was feeling...lately....

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