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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Blow Jobs

    Hot
    Air
    Balloon rides
    Birthday candle flames. :chococake:
    Slender glass vases out in front,
    flatulence
    from the rear. :firefart:
    Windmills spin
    grasses wave,
    When whales have come to surface,
    Smoke rings
    Bubble pipes
    A fat man's deafening belch.
    Southern winds
    Snowly summits
    The sound of a passing train.

    Jeez Banned

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    Each has it's purpose
    when it comes to the
    job of blowing.


    Should it not be it's
    whistle that blows?? :wistle:

    Even though it's
    force alone duth
    cause to make wind. ;)


    Posted By Jeez | Mar 11, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Excellent point Jeez !

    I hadn't thought of that. Thanks for the tip. I'll polish the poem again, and maybe extend it as well.

    Thanks again :)


    Blessed be

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    hmm....interesting.
    just gave me a series of images that I'd never put together...

    made me think. Thanks!

    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    what about that release of a sigh, that blows too. just a thought :smile:

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    LOL!
    Good one, Sally!
    Not at all what I was expecting! :blush:
    I would love to see this expanded!
    Don't forget air conditioners and heaters!
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Mar 16, 2007
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    zaac Banned

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    this is so cool. no trip to go on, no story to follow, and left handedly bizarre. One of those things that goes well with a double espresso

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Mar 16, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    ROFL - True.... so very true LOL
    Hey SALLY - interesting poem - humorous to say the very least - but also a good example of a list poem actually.

    Though I am a little terrified of the fat mans' belch LOL - nice writing

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 20, 2007
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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    ROFLMAO

    Ok, now that I'm done having early morning hysterics and laughter... >> *coughs*

    This was very well done, and very original, might I add. I don't think I've ever seen something quite like it, and with your permission, I would love to send it to my stepmother in an email. She absolutely loves this kind of stuff.


    Posted By Sealiah | Mar 20, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :offtopic:

    Hey SEALIAH - at the top of every thread you should see Thread Tools - There's a neat option --- Mail this Page --- that allows you to mail the page link to someone ;)

    Jacquii.
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    Dear Sally,

    Sealiah is absolutely right!!! I do not EVER remember seeing something like this. Bravo, this is refreshing, unique, and awesome. Although my mind went straight to the gutter, and thought of a palpitating blow (exhale), after making love to the love of your life. Oooppss, close your eyes...children of JPiC., LOLOL!! Awesome Ms Roberts, and I might add that it is such a treat when you come in on weekends. Your range a writer is wonderful, and you keep us guessing. You are unpredictable, and I love it!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}:giftrose:
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    ROFL @ the "palpitating blow" :yay2:

    Jacquii.

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