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    Muiriosa New Member

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    Will it be always that I am to break the convention,
    The nature of my age, how we are meant to be?
    In the moments of silence I hear only miscomprehension;
    Has this game of drink and drain become too much already?
    To be verbose must be innate or some sort of wonderful thing
    No barriers, no walls, the clear absence of internal thought;
    To scream and shout like the flapping of a wing
    Fixed on youth, the genuine shit, that cannot be bought.
    Flashing cameras in a hallway, excited shouts by the door
    Ready for the town, skirts and shirts and ties and hair
    Perfume that chokes though a friendly odour
    Convention may grasp me with this wish to be there.
    But convention needs people like me to break it
    And better that, than to go along and to fake it.


    Posted By Muiriosa | Oct 31, 2006
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    lanaia74 New Member

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    VERY well done!:pony: :gossip:


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 3, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    One of the best sonnets I've read

    ~Serenity~ ~Pixie Princess~

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    Hi there! Great write you've got here :) I absolutely love the last two lines! They really tie it all up nicely. Very well written! Wonderful work, keep it up! :)

    Smiles!,
    ~Serenity~


    Posted By ~Serenity~ | Nov 3, 2006
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