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    Broken Dreams

    I wanted you to love me,
    To hold me in your heart,
    The words I wanted most to hear,
    Were, “we will never part.”

    I wanted you to kiss me,
    Your arms around me tight,
    To be with me, each hour, each day,
    Until each day was night,

    I wanted you to touch me,
    As only you could do,
    A thrill that I cannot explain,
    That comes from only you.

    I wanted us to be as one,
    From this day, evermore,
    But all my hopes and dreams were gone,
    When you walked out the door.

    I watched, I hoped, I prayed that you,
    Would turn, to question, “why”?
    Now you are gone, I am alone,
    And I will surely die.

    Each day I wait, with hungry heart,
    With aching arms for you,
    Each day, I die a little more,
    My love, for you, still true.


    Posted By ronbliss | Jun 30, 2007
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    Ron,

    you have captured the dull throb then ache of love's leaving. As always, so very measured yet so easily read.

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    Thanks for sharin

    Jerry

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    Jerry,

    Thanks once again for reading and responding...... Though I have been happily married for a great many years I do like to write poems of this nature. And, I write a lot of them. I love trying to get into the heart and mind of others and feel what they are feeling. When I was working, (retired now) I used to listen to individuals at work, especially the younger ones, and I would try to feel what they feel so I could put some rhyme with it. Again, Jerry, thank you for your time.
    Ron


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    Dear Ron,

    This is so heartfelt and I wonder how many have lived this very poem. It is sad and yet the end is so full of undying hope. Beautifully crafted and executed as usual from you. I could feel the longing and I actually said to myself that I hope his love returns. Awesome write Ron!

    Kimberly :)

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    PaintedDiary,

    Thank you for responding to Broken Dreams. I guess there are two ways of looking at a lost love like this. While you ache for the return of that love, later you may realize it was not meant to be. That one was a part of my past and there she remains. In the past. Again, thank you.

    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Feb 17, 2008
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