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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Whatever possessed me
    to take the big leap,
    With rubbers attached
    to my ankles and feet.
    Can't get me to try it
    won't catch me up there,
    But OH NO!!!! Here I GO!!!!!!
    upside down in the air!!!!

    NOT READY TO DIE!!!!!!
    my brain screamed and then said,
    I know I will land
    on my face and my head!
    Both feet made a jerk
    and bounced me to heck,
    I couldn't believe
    that I still had my neck.

    Will I try it again?
    no, likely as not,
    'Cause I soiled the only
    panties I'd brought.
    The fall took my bladder,
    my bowels and my breath,
    I'll just leave it to those
    who doesn't fear death.

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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Sally,

    LOLOLOLOLOL, I loved this write. Those lines are classic gold!!!! I am still laughing my ass off!!!!! Hope you enjoyed the adventure! LOL Awesome! Different, fresh, and new! Excellent Rating!!!

    Kim;)2

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thanks Kim :)


    I wouldn't do that again for nothin' The adrenalin rush was too much for me.

    So glad you liked it :)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    And sometimes they say "one is more than enough" LOL - SALLY this write is just too cute lol - I love the spontaneity of this write. And I must admit to a little bit of envy. But then again - never have I been invited to the bungee cord ROFL.... I think I'd do it though - but the cord had better be able to support 600 lbs :p

    Nice poem. Fresh AND cute - Thanx for the read.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | May 31, 2007
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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    oh lord... this one was hilarious....
    i'm still dealing with residual chuckling...
    you have a great light hearted style.. which gives me a glimpse of your personality in real life... i already know that you would be a very fun person to hang around with....
    two thumbs up for making me laugh....

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank You very much.
    Jacquii. I am glad I could put a smile on your pretty face. Laughter is the best medicine, Exstreem sports I believe are for the extreemests. and I don't believe I can really handle the shock of it. I think I will keep my feet on the ground from now on.


    Phillip "The hunk" Thank you for your warmest comments I appreciate you taking the time to read this one. I like to have fun, but not if it's gonna stretch my neck out LOL.
    Thanks hunk :)

    Blessings

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