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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Butterfly Ritual Haiku

    Butterfly trail dusts
    heart to nectar my garden
    pollinate my soul.

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    ok....thank you for breaking it down to me, I enjoy this and when I think about it, I'm always lending a helping hand or doing more for somebody than I do for myself...Itz always good but sometimes I'm used as a doormat, it hurtz but i'm still there for my friends no matter what; thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Aug 4, 2006
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    KingAce, you are so welcome! Much luv.....Kim
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey KIM - don't know how I managed to not comment on this piece - thought I had...

    Anyway - very creative haiku - love the play on words, as the butterfly ---> flower ---> nectar ---> pollinate = very nice read! Enjoyed the picture you created - very nice sharing - Thanx

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 31, 2006
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    They soop up the tasty
    nectars from the gardens,
    To make them bloom.

    As 'm sure you do.

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By Jeez | Sep 1, 2006
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    the part I liked the best was the first line butterfly trail dusts a whimsical line, sometimes nectar can be poison if the wrong flower is chosen

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