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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    i grasp on to the inverted inspection that lets me feel like i'm doing something
    i get the suspicion that all the analizing i do will never change the truth of what i've been through...

    no matter, no reason... no answers...
    it is what it is.. and no amount of pretty painting will change it.
    ah but there's so many factors that contributed to my grudges...
    to make this inbittered...
    i only had to reflect on all the careless, destructive actions of the so called "authority"
    i sound like the minority... like the rest of the population...
    all the circles we run, just trying to figure out why we do what we do....
    if i sound unclear... if i come off as mundaine and indesisive...
    it's because i put my finger on root of it all...
    why we feel the call to seek retribution in resulting harm to our reputations...
    a name for every flaw we hold...
    i am known only for what i've sown...
    a set fate i cant escape from... constantly trying to prove all the supposed right's wrong....
    a desperation, please let this exsistance be more then just this...

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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    The answers are there in your words .... if you could just but see. It is because we ARE all human and born to err. We grow striving for perfection but for each of us perfection is different. The diversity is there because what kind of world would it be if we were all the same? I love reading your work Blood. You open the mind to introspection. These are things we all ask in one way or another. Keep doing what you do hon..... it is cathartic and healing.

    *hugs*

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Dec 19, 2007
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    Benny New Member

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    I was perfect once, then woke up...no reality in it. Lots of feeling in your work...well done.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 22, 2007
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