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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by nomadicrhymer, Feb 6, 2008.



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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Choice floats aloft as
    realizations endure all
    new doors welcome me.

    Nomad

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    This is so true! Many people say they have no choice for the circumstances they're in but the reality is there's always a choice. Making choices do open doors for new opportunities! You have summed up, in a few words and lines, what I've been telling my granddaughter for years!

    Choice floats aloft as
    realizations endure all
    new doors welcome me.

    Great write,
    Gail


    Posted By butchiesmom | Feb 6, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks Gail...yes, we do always have a choice...most people find it easier not to choose so that they can blame everyone and everything else.

    Nomad

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    hey nomad,

    i've read all your haikus and i like yours better than i've ever read. somehow you give them a tangible emotion that has a lilt and an edge at the same time. And it always has a sensual feminine strong feel to it...like you know when to use it but also when not to in a very delicate way.

    ok i'll be quiet now.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Feb 7, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    Very well written and understood Nomad!
    Your freedom here wecomes all to read your find works!
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks zaac and Curtis...wow...very nice comments guys...I appreciate the encouragement...and, zaac I like the way you see underneath the layers. :curtsey:

    Nomad:dance:
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    actually Zaac I believe this would be a Senryu....... Haiku are about Nature. This is a fine Senryu Nomad..... Beautifully done.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 11, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Trust Mysty to know! LOL! When I was writing it, the thought crossed my mind (about the lack of nature) and I forgot about it...thanks Mysty!! Or...maybe human nature? :angel:

    Nomad

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    Human nature doesn't count, Nomad, lol.

    I wish I could see all the layers myself but I enjoyed what I did understand ;)

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 11, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    LOL@ Terence...thanks for the comments! Forgive my late reply...I'm trying to get back into carving out time at night to be here...gotta get a life!
    I appreciate that you stopped in to read!
    Nomad

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