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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Welcome To Tag Poetry:

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    A nice poetry collaboration game.
    Will inspire JPiC Poets to collaborate for the goal of creating poetry.
    Enjoy - Play by the rules AND Happy posting.



    Tag Poetry Rules:
    1. I start a poem with four lines. Then I will "tag" a Member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry"

    2. I will then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.
      Note: Please put the Tag Poetry link in the PM
      Example Tag: Tag MsJacquiiC - You're It For Tag Poetry: [noparse]http://jpicforum.info/forum-games/collaboration-game-tag-poetry-4250.html[/noparse]

    3. The Member tagged will then copy the previous lines into the next thread post, leaves a space between the stanzas, and then adds their four lines

    4. At the end of their lines that Member will then "tag" the next member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry" after their four lines. The Member should then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.

    5. The next Member copies the previous 8 lines of poetry and adds their four lines... and so on until the Member with lines 17 through 20 (the 5th stanza of each tag poem)

    6. The Member who ends up doing lines 17 thru 20 (the 5th stanza) has to add their four lines and tag the last person with the words... "Tag [membername] - Wrap it up please!"
      ** This let's the last tagged Member know that their stanza will be ending the poem **



    Extra Guidelines:
    1. A little math: Each Tag Poem will have a total of 24 lines AND 6 participating Members.
    2. The Member who starts the tag poem gives it a title and a theme if necessary.
    3. The Member who starts a tag poem must also post the rules again in the post he or she starts.
    4. All participating Members must stick to the given theme.
    5. You must notify the tagged Member by sending a PM - otherwise they may not know they have been tagged.
    6. If the next Member tagged doesn't respond in 3 days the previous Member tags someone else.
    7. It is ok to tag a member who has previously participated in the same poem.
    8. It is ok for two people to tag one another back and fourth until a poem is complete.

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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 7, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    OK - I will start the first thread - KIM and I will show you how it's done :p
    Jacquii.
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    Jazz Singer Girl

    She's diversity personified, playing her piano keyboard
    Tenacity and strength in her rainbowed aura of colours
    That jazz she sings wells from within and forth it pours
    Like two paintings of Niagara on one wall: Art museum

    TAG KIM - You're It For Tag Poetry :twitcy:


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 7, 2007
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    You are not a math major are you?


    Posted By Kit Carson | Aug 7, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    LOL - I am not and never have been a math major - though I did sort of fancy algebra - that was about 17 years ago :twitcy: But now I've correct the 1st post - so :p

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 7, 2007
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    Jazz Singer Girl

    She's diversity personified, playing her piano keyboard
    Tenacity and strength in her rainbowed aura of colours
    That jazz she sings wells from within and forth it pours
    Like two paintings of Niagara on one wall: Art museum

    Billowing a smoky soliloquy, Lady Day style
    Notes as fine as a red sable brush
    Stroking a Harlem canvas; A still life of Strange Fruit
    From her instrument echoes the heart of Jazz

    TAG MS JACQUII - You're It For Tag Poetry :p
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Jazz Singer Girl

    She's diversity personified, playing her piano keyboard
    Tenacity and strength in her rainbowed aura of colours
    That jazz she sings wells from within and forth it pours
    Like two paintings of Niagara on one wall: Art museum

    Billowing a smoky soliloquy, Lady Day style
    Notes as fine as a red sable brush
    Stroking a Harlem canvas; A still life of Strange Fruit
    From her instrument echoes the heart of Jazz

    One wish residing in her soul, an epiphany of sorts:
    To play that Ellington caravan the way it is
    meant to be played; To master the keys (if you will)
    and open the door to a miasma of song.

    TAG MS KIM - you're up for Tag Poetry :p
    btw - AWESOME lines!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 13, 2007
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    Jazz Singer Girl

    She's diversity personified, playing her piano keyboard
    Tenacity and strength in her rainbowed aura of colours
    That jazz she sings wells from within and forth it pours
    Like two paintings of Niagara on one wall: Art museum

    Billowing a smoky soliloquy, Lady Day style
    Notes as fine as a red sable brush
    Stroking a Harlem canvas; A still life of Strange Fruit
    From her instrument echoes the heart of Jazz

    One wish residing in her soul, an epiphany of sorts:
    To play that Ellington caravan the way it is
    meant to be played; To master the keys (if you will)
    and open the door to a miasma of song.

    A jazz era love affair; pure elegance
    The way she enchants the keys would give one pause
    Playin' a courtship of ivory swans and onyx doves
    Butter cream smooth; she is a sophisticated lady

    TAG MS JACQUII - you're up for Tag Poetry

    AWESOME lines and I'm lovin this!

    PD ;)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Jazz Singer Girl

    She's diversity personified, playing her piano keyboard
    Tenacity and strength in her rainbowed aura of colours
    That jazz she sings wells from within and forth it pours
    Like two paintings of Niagara on one wall: Art museum

    Billowing a smoky soliloquy, Lady Day style
    Notes as fine as a red sable brush
    Stroking a Harlem canvas; A still life of Strange Fruit
    From her instrument echoes the heart of Jazz

    One wish residing in her soul, an epiphany of sorts:
    To play that Ellington caravan the way it is
    meant to be played; To master the keys (if you will)
    and open the door to a miasma of song.

    A jazz era love affair; pure elegance
    The way she enchants the keys would give one pause
    Playin' a courtship of ivory swans and onyx doves
    Butter cream smooth; she is a sophisticated lady

    So sophisticated Da Vinci couldn't capture her lines,
    Her hipsway on piano bench a Mona-Lisa-masterpiece.
    More scrumptious than Cezanne's peaches, this girl is
    Bad. Her rhythm is freedom-flight personified.


    Tag MS KIM - Wrap it up please!


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 17, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Well!! After THAT masterpiece...who would have the nerve to follow?
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    Jazz Singer Girl

    She's diversity personified, playing her piano keyboard
    Tenacity and strength in her rainbowed aura of colours
    That jazz she sings wells from within and forth it pours
    Like two paintings of Niagara on one wall: Art museum

    Billowing a smoky soliloquy, Lady Day style
    Notes as fine as a red sable brush
    Stroking a Harlem canvas; A still life of Strange Fruit
    From her instrument echoes the heart of Jazz

    One wish residing in her soul, an epiphany of sorts:
    To play that Ellington caravan the way it is
    meant to be played; To master the keys (if you will)
    and open the door to a miasma of song.

    A jazz era love affair; pure elegance
    The way she enchants the keys would give one pause
    Playin' a courtship of ivory swans and onyx doves
    Butter cream smooth; she is a sophisticated lady

    So sophisticated Da Vinci couldn't capture her lines,
    Her hipsway on piano bench a Mona-Lisa-masterpiece.
    More scrumptious than Cezanne's peaches, this girl is
    Bad. Her rhythm is freedom-flight personified.

    Throwin' down scat like Grandmas' peach marmalade
    Ancient oceans ripple with her sway; Harlem's Mona Lisa
    Victorious; A ticklin' ivory wish; she brought Ellington back awhile
    She is bad, her passion is jazz; phenomenally does she sang.


    :grandpiano::sax: Collab between Ms Jacquii and PD is done---->Sizzzzlllleeeeee!!!!
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    ABSOLUTELY SIZZZZZZLLLLIIIIINNNNGG!!! Whoa! Love, love, love it! You two need to do that more often!

    Nomad
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :wow: SUCH A BRILLIANT PIECE OF POETRY!
    Such a pleasure to collab with MS KIM - I agree with you MS NOMAD
    Our styles seemed to mesh very lovely actually - A bit of abstract with sensational "realism" - if you will... I love love love it too - So happy the way it turned out = BRILLIANT - AND Thank you MS KIM for the opportunity!

    So now YAWL know how tag poetry goes...
    I think KIM will be starting the next tag - so be watching your PM box :)

    Now I'm gonna post the 1st Tag Poem in the Miscellanous section - And will post each completed tag in the appropriate poetry forum!

    Jacquii.
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    Thank you Ms Nomad!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is BRILLIANT YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :wow::wow::wow: This was some collab if I say so myself!!!!!!!!!!! It was heavenly writing with you Ms Jacquii, and a pleasure. Actually, writing with you raised the bar...I had to raise my bar to match your awesome style. Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!! You made me work for it too, lololol!!!!!! Nevertheless it is A MASTERPIECE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thank you so much for the opportunity as well.

    As you can see everyone playing tag poetry is simply heavenly. You can collab with that person you always wanted to, or a collage tag is awesome Everyone or both people involved in tag poetry can use this as another piece for your writing portfolio as well!!!!

    Above all, IT IS YOURS, and have fun with it,you can spice it up as much as you want or go as abstract as you want, and mixed styles are awesome as Ms Jacquii and I have shown, that can blend into a poetic smoothie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I will begin the next tag in a few days, sooooo be on the look out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Loved this opportunity Ms Jacquii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love Ya!

    Kim ;)
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    Tag Poetry # 2.....

    Dance of Death


    The stench of decay succumbs the sunset
    Noctum creatures emerge on the battlefield
    The hallows of my soul face turbulence
    Shadow people beg for center stage

    Tag KIT....You have been tagged for Tag Poetry! :p

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    Tag Poetry # 2.....

    Dance of Death

    The stench of decay succumbs the sunset
    Noctum creatures emerge on the battlefield
    The hallows of my soul face turbulence
    Shadow people beg for center stage

    Ninja warrior grabs ink and parchment
    Sword of light to combat darkness
    Grey moves in diffusing lightness
    Thunder rolls down hill and dale


    Tag Kim....You are it and so much more!
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    Tag Poetry # 2.....

    Dance of Death

    The stench of decay succumbs the sunset
    Noctum creatures emerge on the battlefield
    The hallows of my soul face turbulence
    Shadow people beg for center stage

    Ninja warrior grabs ink and parchment
    Sword of light to combat darkness
    Grey moves in diffusing lightness
    Thunder rolls down hill and dale

    Lightning etched warrior ink
    Master's swords burn brimstone words
    Darkness pays homage to principles of life
    Cadavers dangle on crest of a pallid moon

    Tag KIT...you are it and so much more too!!! :) :p

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    Tag Poetry # 2.....

    Dance of Death

    The stench of decay succumbs the sunset
    Noctum creatures emerge on the battlefield
    The hallows of my soul face turbulence
    Shadow people beg for center stage

    Ninja warrior grabs ink and parchment
    Sword of light to combat darkness
    Grey moves in diffusing lightness
    Thunder rolls down hill and dale

    Lightning etched warrior ink
    Master's swords burn brimstone words
    Darkness pays homage to principles of life
    Cadavers dangle on crest of a pallid moon

    Wizard and sorcerer’s apprentice slip
    Into the vale of dark’s delight
    Shadow dancing with evil’s spawns
    Heart’s desire burning in the cold pale night

    Back to you Jolie H

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    WOA....MsJ and Kim...lol. how are we all supposed to follow?
    hmm. hope to do it sometime xD
    lol...or can more than one collaboration be going at one time?
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Nope - just 1 at a time MS MANGO
    The idea actually is to get the entire Community involved :)
    Just wanted to do a collabo with KIM for example lol
    seems the idea has stuck...

    Jacquii.

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    lol okies.
    i was confused because if only two people are collaborating.....it's only two people, not a community ><

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