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    Where We Began

    I closed my eyes to block the fears
    and felt your thumb gently brush away my tears
    I opened my eyes and there you were,
    your smile singling out some happy sighs.

    With slightly parted lips I exhale your scent
    My tears now fossilized by moonlight
    A cool zephyr nestles our first stanza
    we began on an Autumnal Equinox

    Colours of Us like poignant Fall hues: The Oak
    even blushes - Yeah. You smile so brilliantly.
    Thoughts of you in my dreaming-eye makes me wet.
    I want to be embraced in your gentility forever.


    Tag Tears of Roses - you're it for tag poetry #4 :)

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    Poetry Tag 4#

    Where We Began

    I closed my eyes to block the fears
    and felt your thumb gently brush away my tears
    I opened my eyes and there you were,
    your smile singling out some happy sighs.

    With slightly parted lips I exhale your scent
    My tears now fossilized by moonlight
    A cool zephyr nestles our first stanza
    we began on an Autumnal Equinox

    Colors of Us like poignant Fall hues: The Oak
    even blushes - Yeah. You smile so brilliantly.
    Thoughts of you in my dreaming-eye makes me wet.
    I want to be embraced in your gentility forever.

    Entwined in passions flight
    Soft mummers exchanged thru the night
    Hearts sing of a love so strong
    Hands erasing the memories of a love gone wrong

    tag who's it
    mmmmmm
    PaintedDiary
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    Where We Began

    I closed my eyes to block the fears
    and felt your thumb gently brush away my tears
    I opened my eyes and there you were,
    your smile singling out some happy sighs.

    With slightly parted lips I exhale your scent
    My tears now fossilized by moonlight
    A cool zephyr nestles our first stanza
    we began on an Autumnal Equinox

    Colors of Us like poignant Fall hues: The Oak
    even blushes - Yeah. You smile so brilliantly.
    Thoughts of you in my dreaming-eye makes me wet.
    I want to be embraced in your gentility forever.

    Entwined in passions flight
    Soft mummers exchanged thru the night
    Hearts sing of a love so strong
    Hands erasing the memories of a love gone wrong

    Fears held captive; I tremble
    Heart’s Dove takes flight; dare I begin again
    Tear filled sands pour; a timeless hourglass is reborn
    Rainbow soaked brushes paint pastel love hues anew


    Thanks Tears of Roses!

    Hmmmm...

    Erik--->TAG you are it for Tag Poetry! Wrap it up please! :)

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    Where We Began

    I closed my eyes to block the fears
    and felt your thumb gently brush away my tears
    I opened my eyes and there you were,
    your smile singling out some happy sighs.

    With slightly parted lips I exhale your scent
    My tears now fossilized by moonlight
    A cool zephyr nestles our first stanza
    we began on an Autumnal Equinox

    Colors of Us like poignant Fall hues: The Oak
    even blushes - Yeah. You smile so brilliantly.
    Thoughts of you in my dreaming-eye makes me wet.
    I want to be embraced in your gentility forever.

    Entwined in passions flight
    Soft mummers exchanged thru the night
    Hearts sing of a love so strong
    Hands erasing the memories of a love gone wrong

    Fears held captive; I tremble
    Heart’s Dove takes flight; dare I begin again
    Tear filled sands pour; a timeless hourglass is reborn
    Rainbow soaked brushes paint pastel love hues anew

    My canvas your body, the longing to reach,
    Epiphany so eloquent in your touch and your speech,
    I reach and grasp finding highways beneath,
    We we're born in thick oils, a lovers masterpiece.

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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light

    Tag Poetry Rules:
    I start a poem with four lines. Then I will "tag" a Member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry"

    I will then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.
    Note: Please put the Tag Poetry link in the PM
    Example Tag: Tag MsJacquiiC - You're It For Tag Poetry: Collaboration Game: Tag Poetry

    The Member tagged will then copy the previous lines into the next thread post, leaves a space between the stanzas, and then adds their four lines

    At the end of their lines that Member will then "tag" the next member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry" after their four lines. The Member should then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.

    The next Member copies the previous 8 lines of poetry and adds their four lines... and so on until the Member with lines 17 through 20 (the 5th stanza of each tag poem)

    The Member who ends up doing lines 17 thru 20 (the 5th stanza) has to add their four lines and tag the last person with the words... "Tag [membername] - Wrap it up please!"
    ** This let's the last tagged Member know that their stanza will be ending the poem **



    Extra Guidelines:
    A little math: Each Tag Poem will have a total of 24 lines AND 6 participating Members.
    The Member who starts the tag poem gives it a title and a theme if necessary.
    The Member who starts a tag poem must also post the rules again in the post he or she starts.
    All participating Members must stick to the given theme.
    You must notify the tagged Member by sending a PM - otherwise they may not know they have been tagged.
    If the next Member tagged doesn't respond in 3 days the previous Member tags someone else.
    It is ok to tag a member who has previously participated in the same poem.
    It is ok for two people to tag one another back and fourth until a poem is complete.
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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light

    I dream in white, most dream in red,
    I've spent my life escaping them,
    my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
    I'm the hush between the trees,


    tag-----------MsJacquiiC :D
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    Nice Tag #4 YAWL - I will post it in Miscellaneous section for commentary shortly...
    ERIK I edited your thread to include the rules - AND - Be sure that you PMed YUUKO to let her know about the tag ;)

    Jacquii.
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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light

    I dream in white, most dream in red,
    I've spent my life escaping them,
    my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
    I'm the hush between the trees,

    And as the zephir blows,
    a faded breeze of demure and effervescent might,
    reluctant am I to endure such a blaze of
    ever-emcompassingly shattered light

    Tag bloodletting_of_the_sky You're it :twitcy:

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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light

    I dream in white, most dream in red,
    I've spent my life escaping them,
    my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
    I'm the hush between the trees,

    And as the zephir blows,
    a faded breeze of demure and effervescent might,
    reluctant am I to endure such a blaze of
    ever-emcompassingly shattered light

    my heart reaches out through windows of soul
    some are hardened and bitter like coal
    but I know the love that began in us all
    with that same love, a shattered light could remain whole


    Tag nomadicrhymer. I trust you to put some heart in this.
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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light


    I dream in white, most dream in red,
    I've spent my life escaping them,
    my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
    I'm the hush between the trees,


    And as the zephir blows,
    a faded breeze of demure and effervescent might,
    reluctant am I to endure such a blaze of
    ever-encompassingly shattered light


    my heart reaches out through windows of soul
    some are hardened and bitter like coal
    but I know the love that began in us all
    with that same love, a shattered light could remain whole


    Delirious ravings of dark spent dreams
    Gleans normalcy from the betwixt and between
    That shattered light grips souls’ dark shadow
    A prisoner still, but wait for tomorrow



    TAG....zaac...you're it!

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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light


    I dream in white, most dream in red,
    I've spent my life escaping them,
    my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
    I'm the hush between the trees,

    And as the zephir blows,
    a faded breeze of demure and effervescent might,
    reluctant am I to endure such a blaze of
    ever-encompassingly shattered light

    my heart reaches out through windows of soul
    some are hardened and bitter like coal
    but I know the love that began in us all
    with that same love, a shattered light could remain whole

    Delirious ravings of dark spent dreams
    Gleans normalcy from the betwixt and between
    That shattered light grips souls’ dark shadow
    A prisoner still, but wait for tomorrow

    I call across dark lattices
    screaming at the shadows in my eyes
    I rant, against the grain against the wall
    and they wonder why my spirit seeks the night

    [-]tag Jer4clarity you're it for tag challenge 5[/-]


    Posted By zaac | Sep 28, 2007
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    Well DANG IT! Where's JER - Did you send him the PM to let him know he was tagged ZAAC???? Anyway - he no-showed - so I complete tag poetry #5 :D
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    Tag Poem #5- Shattered Light


    I dream in white, most dream in red,
    I've spent my life escaping them,
    my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
    I'm the hush between the trees,

    And as the zephir blows,
    a faded breeze of demure and effervescent might,
    reluctant am I to endure such a blaze of
    ever-encompassingly shattered light

    my heart reaches out through windows of soul
    some are hardened and bitter like coal
    but I know the love that began in us all
    with that same love, a shattered light could remain whole

    Delirious ravings of dark spent dreams
    Gleans normalcy from the betwixt and between
    That shattered light grips souls’ dark shadow
    A prisoner still, but wait for tomorrow

    I call across dark lattices
    screaming at the shadows in my eyes
    I rant, against the grain against the wall
    and they wonder why my spirit seeks the night

    But yay that I do dream in white
    whilst most dream in red, and I've spent my life escaping them.
    I am the hush between the trees, My way the silken shattered light.
    Can you see me? I am the ghost whisper of freedom.
    [IMG]


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 9, 2007
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    Graduation day

    Tag Poetry Rules:
    I start a poem with four lines. Then I will "tag" a Member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry"

    I will then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.
    Note: Please put the Tag Poetry link in the PM
    Example Tag: Tag MsJacquiiC - You're It For Tag Poetry: http://jpicforum.info/forum-games/collaboration-game-tag-poetry-4250.html

    The Member tagged will then copy the previous lines into the next thread post, leaves a space between the stanzas, and then adds their four lines

    At the end of their lines that Member will then "tag" the next member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry" after their four lines. The Member should then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.

    The next Member copies the previous 8 lines of poetry and adds their four lines... and so on until the Member with lines 17 through 20 (the 5th stanza of each tag poem)

    The Member who ends up doing lines 17 thru 20 (the 5th stanza) has to add their four lines and tag the last person with the words... "Tag [membername] - Wrap it up please!"
    ** This let's the last tagged Member know that their stanza will be ending the poem **



    Extra Guidelines:
    A little math: Each Tag Poem will have a total of 24 lines AND 6 participating Members.
    The Member who starts the tag poem gives it a title and a theme if necessary.
    The Member who starts a tag poem must also post the rules again in the post he or she starts.
    All participating Members must stick to the given theme.
    You must notify the tagged Member by sending a PM - otherwise they may not know they have been tagged.
    If the next Member tagged doesn't respond in 3 days the previous Member tags someone else.
    It is ok to tag a member who has previously participated in the same poem.
    It is ok for two people to tag one another back and fourth until a poem is complete.

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    Tag Poetry #6 - Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Graduation day,
    I'm left here with nothing to say,
    my pennance wasn't sweet relief,
    the price was hers to pay

    tag MsJacquiiC
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    Tag Poetry #6 - Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Graduation day,
    I'm left here with nothing to say,
    my pennance wasn't sweet relief,
    the price was hers to pay

    And what a price was paid
    considering my prepaid beliefs...
    Of course economics class I dreamed away.
    I flitted away like money; Dew on the leaf.

    Tag ERIK - your it for tag poetry ;)

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    Graduation day (Dual of lovers)

    Tag Poetry #6 - Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Graduation day
    I'm left here with nothing to say,
    my pennance wasn't sweet relief,
    the price was hers to pay,

    And what a price was paid
    considering my prepaid beliefs...
    Of course economics class I dreamed away.
    I flitted away like money; Dew on the leaf.

    had I kept you not below, but beneath
    maybe less now my heart would sink,
    what can dew on a leaf be but the summation of my cries, nothing dry,
    except somehow its not enough of a release to let it go by,

    tag msJ
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    Tag Poetry #6 - Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Graduation day
    I'm left here with nothing to say,
    my pennance wasn't sweet relief,
    the price was hers to pay,

    And what a price was paid
    considering my prepaid beliefs...
    Of course economics class I dreamed away.
    I flitted away like money; Dew on the leaf.

    had I kept you not below, but beneath
    maybe less now my heart would sink,
    what can dew on a leaf be but the summation of my cries, nothing dry,
    except somehow its not enough of a release to let it go by,

    Betrayal my darling? You dare speak, your heart strings
    like algebra without symmetrical geometry and home training?
    This madness of rhyme we planned. This salty scheme
    of nothingness. My tear-rain is but a GED. Rise hired.

    Tag MR E-DIZZY :D

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    Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Tag Poetry #6 - Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Graduation day
    I'm left here with nothing to say,
    my pennance wasn't sweet relief,
    the price was hers to pay,

    And what a price was paid
    considering my prepaid beliefs...
    Of course economics class I dreamed away.
    I flitted away like money; Dew on the leaf.

    had I kept you not below, but beneath
    maybe less now my heart would sink,
    what can dew on a leaf be but the summation of my cries, nothing dry,
    except somehow its not enough of a release to let it go by,

    Betrayal my darling? You dare speak, your heart strings
    like algebra without symmetrical geometry and home training?
    This madness of rhyme we planned. This salty scheme
    of nothingness. My tear-rain is but a GED. Rise hired.

    dare I speak. lest I let time become a thief
    once again for the rest of my life,
    speak once more as before, it makes it doubly easier to remember,
    how our love exploded in my face like a fallen star,

    tag msJ
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    Tag Poetry #6 - Graduation Day (Dual of Lovers)

    Graduation day
    I'm left here with nothing to say,
    my pennance wasn't sweet relief,
    the price was hers to pay,

    And what a price was paid
    considering my prepaid beliefs...
    Of course economics class I dreamed away.
    I flitted away like money; Dew on the leaf.

    had I kept you not below, but beneath
    maybe less now my heart would sink,
    what can dew on a leaf be but the summation of my cries, nothing dry,
    except somehow its not enough of a release to let it go by,

    Betrayal my darling? You dare speak, your heart strings
    like algebra without symmetrical geometry and home training?
    This madness of rhyme we planned. This salty scheme
    of nothingness. My tear-rain is but a GED. Rise hired.

    dare I speak. lest I let time become a thief
    once again for the rest of my life,
    speak once more as before, it makes it doubly easier to remember,
    how our love exploded in my face like a fallen star,

    Supernova that day at Columbine
    Me the puppet of purposeless gybing
    That want of education blew up in my face
    Now I'm but a ghost, simply vybing like poetic grace.
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    Tag Poetry #7 - Stars

    Tag Poetry Rules:
    I start a poem with four lines. Then I will "tag" a Member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry"

    I will then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.
    Note: Please put the Tag Poetry link in the PM
    Example Tag: Tag MsJacquiiC - You're It For Tag Poetry: Collaboration Game: Tag Poetry

    The Member tagged will then copy the previous lines into the next thread post, leaves a space between the stanzas, and then adds their four lines

    At the end of their lines that Member will then "tag" the next member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry" after their four lines. The Member should then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.

    The next Member copies the previous 8 lines of poetry and adds their four lines... and so on until the Member with lines 17 through 20 (the 5th stanza of each tag poem)

    The Member who ends up doing lines 17 thru 20 (the 5th stanza) has to add their four lines and tag the last person with the words... "Tag [membername] - Wrap it up please!"
    ** This let's the last tagged Member know that their stanza will be ending the poem **



    Extra Guidelines:
    A little math: Each Tag Poem will have a total of 24 lines AND 6 participating Members.
    The Member who starts the tag poem gives it a title and a theme if necessary.
    The Member who starts a tag poem must also post the rules again in the post he or she starts.
    All participating Members must stick to the given theme.
    You must notify the tagged Member by sending a PM - otherwise they may not know they have been tagged.
    If the next Member tagged doesn't respond in 3 days the previous Member tags someone else.
    It is ok to tag a member who has previously participated in the same poem.
    It is ok for two people to tag one another back and fourth until a poem is complete.


    I gaze upon your twinkling stardust
    Drinking your dusty beams at night
    I turn to my pillow wishing upon
    This dynamic universe: My life

    My life I see each wondrous night.
    When dreaming of my handsome knight.
    He comes to visit, gives me joy.
    I feel him close, the real mccoy.


    Tag Ms Jacquii...You Are IT!!!
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    Tag Poetry #7 - Stars

    I gaze upon your twinkling stardust
    Drinking your dusty beams at night
    I turn to my pillow wishing upon
    This dynamic universe: My life

    My life I see each wondrous night.
    When dreaming of my handsome knight.
    He comes to visit, gives me joy.
    I feel him close, the real mccoy.

    As close as is sin-lust homemade;
    My one knight - my handsome star
    I drink his dusty star-beams by day,
    Making his love near, never far.

    TAG MYSTY YOU'RE IT FOR TAG POETRY #7 ;)

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