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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Tag Poetry #7 - Stars

    I gaze upon your twinkling stardust
    Drinking your dusty beams at night
    I turn to my pillow wishing upon
    This dynamic universe: My life

    My life I see each wondrous night.
    When dreaming of my handsome knight.
    He comes to visit, gives me joy.
    I feel him close, the real mccoy.

    As close as is sin-lust homemade;
    My one knight - my handsome star
    I drink his dusty star-beams by day,
    Making his love near, never far.

    At night he watches me undress
    I show through open window,
    my star lights each room by night
    with beams of his wanton lust glow.


    TAG JOLIE YOU'RE IT FOR TAG POETRY #7 ;)


    Posted By Mysty | Dec 23, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Tag Poetry #7 - Stars

    I gaze upon your twinkling stardust
    Drinking your dusty beams at night
    I turn to my pillow wishing upon
    This dynamic universe: My life

    My life I see each wondrous night.
    When dreaming of my handsome knight.
    He comes to visit, gives me joy.
    I feel him close, the real mccoy.

    As close as is sin-lust homemade;
    My one knight - my handsome star
    I drink his dusty star-beams by day,
    Making his love near, never far.

    At night he watches me undress
    I show through open window,
    my star lights each room by night
    with beams of his wanton lust glow.

    Once he’s in, the curtain’s drawn.
    We love until the dawn.
    Then in my daytime hours I cry,
    each time I hear a lullaby.

    "Tag Danette - Wrap it up please!"


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 14, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh my! Great lines JOLIE - I hope you remembered to PM DANETTE ;)

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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Yeah, I did.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 15, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Great! ;)

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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    I don't know where Danette is, I guess I better tag someone else.

    Tag Mysty - wrap this up please.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 20, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanx JOLIE - yeah - I haven't seen DANETTE in a while - MYSTY'll be happy to add lines though - and a little birdy tells me the next tag is gonna be all-about haiku :yay:

    Jacquii.
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    Tag Poetry #7 - Stars

    I gaze upon your twinkling stardust
    Drinking your dusty beams at night
    I turn to my pillow wishing upon
    This dynamic universe: My life

    My life I see each wondrous night.
    When dreaming of my handsome knight.
    He comes to visit, gives me joy.
    I feel him close, the real mccoy.

    As close as is sin-lust homemade;
    My one knight - my handsome star
    I drink his dusty star-beams by day,
    Making his love near, never far.

    At night he watches me undress
    I show through open window,
    my star lights each room by night
    with beams of his wanton lust glow.

    Once he’s in, the curtain’s drawn.
    We love until the dawn.
    Then in my daytime hours I cry,
    each time I hear a lullaby.

    I live only for the nights he's here
    the rest of the time I am just hanging on.
    My body knows when that time draws near
    because it is cloudless and I see clear and far,
    the heavens release my lover's star.


    and starting Tag 8 - A Haiku at MsJacquii's request


    It Blows

    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.


    Tag Ms Jacquii ..... You're it!!!


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 21, 2008
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    Thanx MYSTY for wrapping the poem up --- OK
    Now.... The Tag Poetry rules again....

    Tag Poetry Rules:
    1. I start a poem with four lines. Then I will "tag" a Member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry"

    2. I will then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.
      Note: Please put the Tag Poetry link in the PM
      Example Tag: Tag MsJacquiiC - You're It For Tag Poetry: [noparse]http://jpicforum.info/forum-games/collaboration-game-tag-poetry-4250.html[/noparse]

    3. The Member tagged will then copy the previous lines into the next thread post, leaves a space between the stanzas, and then adds their four lines

    4. At the end of their lines that Member will then "tag" the next member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry" after their four lines. The Member should then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.

    5. The next Member copies the previous 8 lines of poetry and adds their four lines... and so on until the Member with lines 17 through 20 (the 5th stanza of each tag poem)

    6. The Member who ends up doing lines 17 thru 20 (the 5th stanza) has to add their four lines and tag the last person with the words... "Tag [membername] - Wrap it up please!"
      ** This let's the last tagged Member know that their stanza will be ending the poem **



    Extra Guidelines:
    1. A little math: Each Tag Poem will have a total of 24 lines AND 6 participating Members.
    2. The Member who starts the tag poem gives it a title and a theme if necessary.
    3. The Member who starts a tag poem must also post the rules again in the post he or she starts.
    4. All participating Members must stick to the given theme.
    5. You must notify the tagged Member by sending a PM - otherwise they may not know they have been tagged.
    6. If the next Member tagged doesn't respond in 3 days the previous Member tags someone else.
    7. It is ok to tag a member who has previously participated in the same poem.
    8. It is ok for two people to tag one another back and fourth until a poem is complete.

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    It Blows
    (collaborated haiku collection)


    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.

    Their zephir's true:
    Aurora borealis
    blows Saint Magnifique.

    Tag BITTER IRONY - you're it!

    Bitter Irony New Member

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    It Blows
    (collaborated haiku collection)


    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.

    Their zephir's true:
    Aurora borealis
    blows Saint Magnifique.

    january wind...
    all night
    these dreams of whiteness

    Tag PAINTEDDIARY - you're it!
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    Tag Poetry #8
    (collaborated haiku collection)



    It Blows

    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.

    Their zephir's true:
    Aurora borealis
    blows Saint Magnifique.

    january wind...
    all night
    these dreams of whiteness

    celestial chimes
    echoes soft as angel harps
    whispers dance aloft


    Tag---> Terence! You are it for Tag Poetry and PM sent!
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    1 smilie = :wow:

    Jacquii.

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    Tag Poetry #8
    (collaborated haiku collection)



    It Blows

    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.

    Their zephir's true:
    Aurora borealis
    blows Saint Magnifique.

    january wind...
    all night
    these dreams of whiteness

    celestial chimes
    echoes soft as angel harps
    whispers dance aloft

    Favonius wakes
    apple orchards bloom
    pearly-white grins


    Tag---> Moonchild! You are next for Tag Poetry - PM sent!


    Posted By Terence | Jan 23, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Tag Poetry #8
    (collaborated haiku collection)


    It Blows
    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.

    Their zephir's true:
    Aurora borealis
    blows Saint Magnifique.

    january wind...
    all night
    these dreams of whiteness

    celestial chimes
    echoes soft as angel harps
    whispers dance aloft

    Favonius wakes
    apple orchards bloom
    pearly-white grins

    Calm snow-white night
    Wolf song wind peals still silence
    Winter lullaby


    Tag---> Jolie! You are next for Tag Poetry - PM sent and WRAP it up please!


    Posted By Moonchild | Jan 23, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    EDITED: Didn't see KIM's edit....
    Nice write Poetic Peoples - KIM if you wanna start the next tag after JOLIE wraps it up = go ahead please ;)

    Jacquii.

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    Tag Poetry #8
    (collaborated haiku collection)


    It Blows
    D'offed hat to the winds
    coming from the northern skies
    briskly blowing winds.

    Their zephir's true:
    Aurora borealis
    blows Saint Magnifique.

    january wind...
    all night
    these dreams of whiteness

    celestial chimes
    echoes soft as angel harps
    whispers dance aloft

    Favonius wakes
    apple orchards bloom
    pearly-white grins

    Calm snow-white night
    Wolf song wind peals still silence
    Winter lullaby

    Wind powders blue ice
    A fractured winter window
    Absence of ripples


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 24, 2008
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    Awesome Collab Everyone! Will do Ms Jacquii! Wanna keep this going...wooohoo!

    Kim :)
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    Now.... The Tag Poetry rules again....

    Tag Poetry Rules:
    1. I start a poem with four lines. Then I will "tag" a Member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry"

    2. I will then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.
      Note: Please put the Tag Poetry link in the PM
      Example Tag: Tag MsJacquiiC - You're It For Tag Poetry: [noparse]http://jpicforum.info/forum-games/collaboration-game-tag-poetry-4250.html[/noparse]

    3. The Member tagged will then copy the previous lines into the next thread post, leaves a space between the stanzas, and then adds their four lines

    4. At the end of their lines that Member will then "tag" the next member by posting "Tag [membername] - You're It For Tag Poetry" after their four lines. The Member should then send the tagged Member a Private Message via the PM System telling them they have been tagged to participate in Tag Poetry.

    5. The next Member copies the previous 8 lines of poetry and adds their four lines... and so on until the Member with lines 17 through 20 (the 5th stanza of each tag poem)

    6. The Member who ends up doing lines 17 thru 20 (the 5th stanza) has to add their four lines and tag the last person with the words... "Tag [membername] - Wrap it up please!"
      ** This let's the last tagged Member know that their stanza will be ending the poem **



    Extra Guidelines:
    1. A little math: Each Tag Poem will have a total of 24 lines AND 6 participating Members.
    2. The Member who starts the tag poem gives it a title and a theme if necessary.
    3. The Member who starts a tag poem must also post the rules again in the post he or she starts.
    4. All participating Members must stick to the given theme.
    5. You must notify the tagged Member by sending a PM - otherwise they may not know they have been tagged.
    6. If the next Member tagged doesn't respond in 3 days the previous Member tags someone else.
    7. It is ok to tag a member who has previously participated in the same poem.
    8. It is ok for two people to tag one another back and fourth until a poem is complete.


    Tag Poetry #9

    Indelible

    Your scent is just as I remember
    eyes ripe with fire’s wanton glow; ignites
    tastes of wild ginger; forbidden nectar sweet
    my breath escapes at a dangerous pace



    Tag You are it for TAG POETRY MS SALLY and PM sent!...:)

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Tag Poetry # 9

    Indelible

    Your scent is just as I remember
    ever ripe with fire's wanton glow ignites
    tastes of wild ginger; forbidden nectar sweet
    my breath escapes at a dangerous pace.


    a kiss of taste on the lips of love
    sends glorious tingles through the night
    appetites of longing hearts draw breathless sighs
    and begin to warm the senses in endless fire.

    Tag you are it for Tag Poetry Ms Jacquii and PM sent :)

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