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    Just a basket full of waste. Driving up and down the streets, waiting for the moment where the noise disturbs the air. And my body goes launching off my chair. Into the glass world of fake hopes, false friends, and faint scenes. Call 911 before death appears at the crime scene.

    The girl and her father stand from afar.
    "Daddy, what happened? Is anyone hurt in that there car?"
    "We shall not know my dear. We shall not know. Come now it is cold out. We wouldn't want to catch a cold now."

    That night she laid clothed in her sheets.
    Thinking of the early disaster of that there crime scene.


    Posted By JessicaKid | Aug 22, 2015
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    I like the way it's worded, especially the beginning.
    There's much said in these few words.
    Great work here I enjoyed the read.


    Posted By Moonchild | Sep 8, 2015
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    I like the way it's worded, especially the beginning.
    There's much said in these few words.
    Great work here I enjoyed the read.


    Posted By Moonchild | Sep 8, 2015
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