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Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by Poetry Garden, Jul 27, 2007.



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    throwing daggers from my eyes
    anger that can not be disguised
    that I can not hide
    nor deny
    and as you said
    you would be dead
    if looks could kill
    throwing daggers from my eyes
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    great theme daggers form the eyes

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    Thanks for commenting on my poetry Erik...I can not disguise my feelings from my face...someone once said I looked like I was throwing knives from my eyes...and that's where this came from
    Thanks again!
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    Hey D....

    Nice..... Short, sweet? and to the point... Great writing, I get a great visual from this.

    Thanx for postin', T


    Posted By lasher | Jul 28, 2007
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    Thanks T. lol no not too sweet...thanks for taking time to comment...appreciate it!

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    How true how true!!!!

    It is said that the
    face can and does
    show all of what is
    in your mind at that
    time.

    Be it daggers or
    of hearts their
    reflections are
    always charted,

    Thanks for the
    read.

    Ohhhh.... and great
    writing as well!!!!


    Posted By Jeez | Jul 28, 2007
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    Thanks Jeez...you are so very right!

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