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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Dali's Return

    The sea rose and roared like
    a mouth to a cave opening eastward.
    A wall of snow white lions emerge,
    claws and teeth bearing, bent and curled,
    coming back time and again.
    ~
    Waters subdue. Bubbles of saliva burp,
    spill backward
    underneath the next coming rage,
    breaking in silver beads,
    racing to meet the thickening fog, and
    ~
    dark figures that emerge
    thrusting shovels into the sand,
    to reveal a giant cracked egg,
    chunks of shell giving way
    to Dali’s return.
    ~
    The figures circle and bow,
    throw their heads back, and
    screech like nesting chicks.
    Clouds like giants fists roll in
    squeezing drops of breast milk
    onto their waiting tongues.


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 20, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    WOW Jolie ...... this could be the beginning to a fantastic fantasy story ..... this is truly awesome. Love it.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 21, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Thanks Mysty,
    This is the first surreal poem I've tried. It was kind of fun to dream up.


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 21, 2008
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