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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, May 17, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Darkness
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    My darkness begins as soon as we are apart
    my soul spurns me because we’re not together
    Then my thoughts entices my heart to articulate
    Just how amazing and unique you are
    With your incredible smile and those delicious ruby-red lips
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    Your soft delicate flesh, yet I speak so brazenly
    Always stumbling and wallowing in the depths of my mind
    if I were ever to be alone with you
    I would surrender my heart and soul
    And make spontaneous impassioned love to you


    Posted By Bear | May 17, 2008
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    I love all the poems I read by you, including this one. Its nice to read a good love poem from time to time, and this one definitly makes the cut for me.

    Keep writing Bear, you are very creative and gifted
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    Dear Bear,

    This is another special poem. I too love your poems as they touch the heart and soul...every time. Yes, keep'm coming!

    PD :giftrose:

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Deep__poet for your terrific comment all your comments makes me happy and smile
    hugs kisses
    bear
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    Painted diary thank you so much for your lovely comment and I truly appreciate everyone of them
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 20, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    This is a lovely love poem filled with passion and honesty.
    Very beautifully written Bear, enjoyed muches :)


    Posted By Moonchild | May 20, 2008
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